In Motari, They All Want to Confess to Me!

I acknowledge the author's writing style, but the premise is truly flawed. The fact that the protagonist, without any overpowered plot armor, managed to survive until it was confirmed that the main character was indeed A Piao is astounding. Rather than calling this a spin-off of Mingchao, it's more like a Laguna-style A Piao story – it's not very meaningful, and A Piao isn't even as strong. So why not just play the game directly? I genuinely dislike stories where the protagonist is replaced by another character, especially when the plot is unknown and there are no overpowered plot armors. Aside from the writing style, there's really nothing worth reading.

To be honest, there are some things I don't understand. He openly visits the head of the Fissare family as Coletta's lover, without even pretending, and keeps it a secret from Coletta. If someone with ulterior motives finds out, they'll set off a landmine, and Coletta won't even have time to react. And can you please not discuss information about the Saintess of Narushiki in a public place like a coffee shop? Games are supposed to be convenient, but is it so hard to discuss things in a private room? The protagonist's character isn't decisive enough; it's a bit cliché.

The following comments may contain minor spoilers; please ignore them if you are sensitive to spoilers. I love Conan, and I may be a bit of a persecutor, but I still quite like the Second Miss. I personally think these things are fine as jokes in the plot, but after reading around chapter 270, I really felt that the Second Miss was quite unfair. What's wrong with the protagonist? How does he treat relationships? As his first girlfriend since I can remember, the person with whom he established a relationship, I really didn't see the protagonist put in much emotion. Basically, all I saw was the Second Miss constantly making concessions. In the Katasia storyline, if I were watching from an omniscient perspective, since I also quite like Katasia (evil laugh), I found the rescue of her quite enjoyable. However, something felt off. Newcomers Tsubaki, Vermouth, and the old rival directly participated in Katasia's rescue, while Coletta remained completely unaware. To her, the protagonist had been out of contact for half a month and had no idea what he was doing. He hadn't even thought to tell her about it (sigh). Whether as his girlfriend or the head of the Mortari family, the former would have reassured her, and the latter would have provided assistance. He completely forgot about her. Then, when the phone finally went through, oh dear, it was his rival who answered. She wasn't planning to send him back, saying he was practically dead. Then she called again—unbelievable! They're really into the 5P game. When they finally met, the second young lady was so happy she almost pounced on him. The protagonist could see her distress and just smiled and said, "I'm back," before immediately introducing the new girl he was trying to win over. Well, alright, it's a fanfic after all, so we can't expect too much from the romance. Besides, there aren't many fanfics about Naruto and Uchiha, so it's passable. Of course, that might just be my personal bias, but I just hope they stop pushing Conan's TV so hard; it's too heartbreaking #(almost crying). As for Fu (I don't care), let's keep playing music and dancing #(evil grin)

Thankfully, Piaozi is a saint; otherwise, an ordinary person would have been crushed by Xiao Ai's gravity. #(Hammer)

March 1st is over 😭😭😭 I feel uneasy

Did the author get so anxious after finishing version 3.1 That they couldn't resist writing some sweet romance scenes right now? #(Laughing and crying)#(laughing and crying)#(laughing and crying)

My goodness, this is the first time I've seen a fanfiction about Mingchao achieve this level of success on Mozambique.

Endless Shennong! Come out!!! #(Insulting)

I've been wondering why they couldn't bring along some characters who are already free agents, like Katia to Raid Hero. She's always on the move anyway. Many free agents could easily travel together. Otherwise, what's the difference between this fanfic and the original? Or is the author simply not good enough to write about multiple characters at the same time? Is it like the game writers who just want to sell cards and then abandon the story after finishing it?

The story is set up with A-Piao himself, but it fails to capture A-Piao's essence. Adding a time traveler's memory doesn't quite capture the unique mindset of a time traveler, resulting in a somewhat weak writing style. The beginning was quite interesting, but the plot became increasingly dull after A-Piao himself was confirmed as the protagonist. Actually, if the protagonist wasn't A-Piao, they could have been quite successful in Lina Xi Tower. Aside from Floro, there are practically no other female characters who had entanglements with A-Piao before his amnesia, perhaps with Kati. Kati is too deeply connected to Lao Ma; besides A-Piao, practically no one has a better way to save him. The other characters could have been won over before A-Piao arrived, and then he could have led the Lina Xi Tower team to a grand finale, even forming a close friendship. Later, A-Piao could have provided support during his raids, providing a reason to open up new maps.