Warhammer: I'm a Babysitter, Not Your Dad!

I originally wrote a long post wanting to complain about the increasingly rapid development of the sadomasochistic (S) plot, but after reading through the comments, I found that the author had labeled it as a harem story. So I deleted the previous post and reposted it, but I still can't help complaining. It's not that I can't accept harems, but the author's depiction of the harem plot is completely less compelling than the family storyline. This is a clear case of the sadomasochistic plot winning big. As one comment said, the current trend of the sadomasochistic plot seems to be rushing towards the position of the subterranean wife, which is completely unpalatable. Currently, apart from the main protagonist's storyline, all other plot lines seem to be giving way to the harem plot. The frequent occurrences of Luo Jia recognizing her mother and the Primarchs demanding recognition for their mothers make it feel like the Primarchs are under a spell, single-mindedly focused on the protagonist's wife position. The book says it's to win the protagonist's attention, but I... I'm wondering why they don't learn from Koz. Koz perfectly demonstrated how to win over the protagonist in the Clarkes arc, while Luo Jia is the complete opposite. His arrogance is off the charts. Because the protagonist promised to always love him, he can shamelessly claim to be his mother. It's unbelievable! I wish the Emperor would slap him. He shows absolutely no respect for the protagonist's wishes. Again, the protagonist is like a diligent but oblivious spiritual mentor, being dragged into a scandalous affair by a bunch of rebellious kids who have barely even met him. He hasn't spent nearly as much time with these female supporting characters as he has with the Primarch. Does this expensive adoptive father have to sell himself into marriage with these women they consider relatives for their own good?

I'm so upset! I wrote a whole bunch of stuff and then accidentally clicked on the long review and it all disappeared. Ugh, Hedgehog Cat, what's wrong with you? I really have to talk to you. In short, I'm just stating my own opinion. Everyone has different thoughts, and I welcome friendly discussion. S is a Chaos God, bro! If you actually write about S taking over, this book will be a disaster. What is that Chaos God? Look at all the books that write about S taking over. What's the selling point of your book? It's nurturing the Primarch, family, and a happy ending. The "father-obsessed" vibe is because the original work is so awful, and everyone's just being abstract, which I think is okay. The Primarch's homeworld in the original work is full of monsters and demons. If you don't feel attached to a guide like a father, you won't like it. Although it is indeed a bit heavy, I think it's normal. Some people in the comments insist that it's selling BL or writing BL. Aren't we all just being abstract? I have a younger brother, and I sometimes feel resentful because my parents favor him, let alone the many in the story. In short, author, don't go crazy and actually make a harem. Warhammer is just not a suitable genre. And stop writing about Sorcerer as a positive character; she's a warp god, how can she be a good person? Author, don't get corrupted! (Crying) If you focus on the book's biggest selling points—the Primarch's development, family bonds, and the perfect Great Crusade—it could be a decent fanfic. Let's not ask for too much. I'm watching your updates every day, along with those of the Lord of the Founding and the Birth of Erebas. Write properly, write two or three million words. I'm just a casual observer, so I might have missed some points. Feel free to discuss this amicably and let's work together to maintain a positive atmosphere in the comments section. #(Crying)

Subscription guide, with instructions: A chapter worth reading: Luo Jia (also known as Dr. Wo, the Divine Physician, the Golden Words Messenger Luo Jia, and the Star Dwarf Iron Man Wo Girl) has a good character design. Perturabo/Dorn (who can turn Plankton around, Dr. Ward, a miracle doctor; compared to the later stories, this is simply a last glimmer of the author's storytelling ability). Ruth (A very heartwarming chapter; the Wolf Girl is a wolf mother) Formulaic plot, but still watchable: Vulcan/Felus (A bland plot, two kind-hearted Primarchs, the main attraction is the Great Mother Dragon, the Voldemort) Forgrim/Saint-Gilles (There's not much plot development; they're just two Primarchs, one arrogant and the other cunning. The Voorhees girl is also unremarkable.) Mortarian Khan (The Death Guard's first company commander and the Legion Commander have a love-hate relationship. Khan doesn't have much of a storyline; he just talks a lot and that's it, just like him). Corax (Corax 2.0, whose daily interactions with the shell are more interesting by comparison) Guilliman (After so much foreshadowing, the Guilliman arc was very disappointing. It was short, the plot was not much different from the original work, Yodon was not as well-developed as Plankton's sister, and the process of educating the Primarch was not shown. #(Vomit)) special: Angron (Slaanesh incarnates and builds a harem; choose based on personal preference, but the encounter between the brainless Angron and his offspring is still quite poignant. It's a chapter that was supposed to be very popular and generate a lot of buzz, but I don't know why it was handled so hastily. If you can accept Slaanesh building a harem, I personally think it's still worth watching #(you know what I mean)). Completely fabricated history: Magnus, Lane (fabricated history, no plot, all just platitudes and padding for word count #(vomit)#(vomit)#(vomit)#(vomit))

Is this author experiencing hormonal imbalance lately? Or is it a congenital emotional deficiency, making it unable to understand human emotions? Or perhaps Alzheimer's? Has the author developed a father complex, causing their brain to spike to 40 degrees Celsius? Or is it a post-COVID-19 sequela? I've never heard of a normal person's intelligence dropping below 90 after a fever. For the sake of your health, author, you'd better see a doctor at Kangning Hospital. In addition, I must thank the author for teaching us so much psychology. Each son has his own effect, and the old father wasn't left out either, constantly spouting grand principles like the Doctrine of the Mean. It's not easy to copy and paste from Baidu, author, please don't overwork yourself and get tenosynovitis from typing. Finally, author, you mentioned that sons all have an Oedipus complex. Who are they infatuated with? Could it be the protagonist? Will the emperor then be the incompetent husband? This kind of family drama is truly unmissable! It deserves proper promotion.

Dude, you used to be in the top 10 of the bestseller list. It feels like you're about to be added to the list of those who die young 🤨

Author, harems aren't off-limits, and I enjoy them too (unless they're exceptionally well-written and interesting, I generally don't read anything other than harems, and I've been a regular on the YY forum; I only got into this one because I found it very engaging). Can you have a harem in Warhammer? I think you can, but author, you can't have Slaanesh! She's too "messy," even more outrageous than that blond guy in Stocking with Garterbelt. Calling her a "public bus" is an insult to public buses, because she's just as chaotic as Tamamo-no-Mae. Look at what happened to Fuchlan, the once noble Grand Duke of the Phoenix, after 10,000 years with Slaanesh in the original work (unfortunately, I can't post pictures in the comments, otherwise I'd definitely show those who think having Slaanesh is okay what she's like—how "terrifying" she is). Therefore, author, I personally think your biggest problem right now is the choice of harem members. Slaanesh is not someone anyone can mess with. In the original work, Fukugen is watching us from that old crooked tree on the back mountain. And if I remember correctly, including a bus in the harem is a huge toxic element in the Y-bar forum. (This is just my personal opinion. Please correct me if I'm wrong. Thank you.)

In which chapter does the Seraphim series begin? (I'd like to avoid this one.)

They can run away now. The plot is getting more and more padded. Everyone was looking forward to the return of all the Primarchs to Terra, which was a welcome development. Now that Horus has finally finished writing, they've added some inexplicable plot to force this padded story. It's hopeless.

I said it was a terrible ending. The beginning was fine, but by the time they got to the last few Primarchs, their theories and practices turned into fascism in red guise. They used resources stolen from the lower classes and formed a private army of underage children, making the kids determined to charge ahead for them, and then shamelessly declared that they were revolutionaries. #(Cute)

From the time the author started teaching the later Primarchs, it felt like they ran out of ideas. Especially after teaching them all, the text was filled with platitudes and filler, and repetitive platitudes and filler at that. Did you feed the same sentence to the AI and have it rewrite it before putting it into the story? You're really making me laugh, author. Many things can be said in a few sentences, but you write a whole page. It's hilarious! And now you're even lecturing readers on the Doctrine of the Mean. I'm supposed to be reading during my free time, and you're acting like a know-it-all, lecturing me. (Don't tell me you're some kind of educational archetype; you've already finished lecturing and you're still writing hundreds of words about the Doctrine of the Mean. If you're not educating the readers, who are you educating?) To put it bluntly, I'm here to criticize you. Delete it if you want. If you delete it, it means you saw it and were angered by me. The money I spent on your later filler articles wasn't wasted. Finally, here's a piece of advice: Write if you want, don't write if you don't.