I'm Not Coolfly's Raw Material

I've read several of Pao'er's books. They were alright at the beginning, but the further I read, the less I could continue. I don't know if it's just me. But I always feel a strange, inexplicable discomfort. With my limited knowledge, I can't pinpoint exactly what's wrong, but I just feel—they're not good. Will I get attacked by Pao'er's fan club for saying this?

What kind of anthropomorphism would make someone think that a final producer is better than a balloon? 😨😨 Did the person who came up with this sentence ever attend a political class? 😨😨

This is terrible writing! I've only read up to chapter 300, but I can't continue. The beginning was bearable, but it just keeps adding filler and padding. A lot of the plot points are written without any thought. In the middle of the story, you tell the Unified Bureau that you built the ships in the Kushen shipyard to cover up your space station's solo shipbuilding operations. You could keep it a secret until the Unified Bureau came and took over the Kushen, then your lie about shipbuilding would inevitably be exposed, and you didn't even bother to address it. And your ex-wife's suspicions about your identity are dragged out until almost the finale, and you're still trying to fool her. And Lin Yan, the spy—after you arranged her office job, she disappeared without a trace. This is terrible writing! You don't write the important parts, just keep adding filler and padding. Did I come here for Warhammer or Warcraft? Over 300 chapters of this filler is unbearable.

The writing style completely changed after entering the "Stars" phase. On one hand, the updates slowed down, making it a bit of a headache to keep up. On the other hand, the main focus shifted to various nameless NPCs, with less and less plot development for the protagonist or his team. Rhodes almost became a background character who wasn't even mentioned. As a result, reading it felt particularly rambling and lengthy...

It's over? So rushed? #(Terrifying)

Does this look like it's almost over?

It's so bumpy, I love it!

Previous Star Alliance books didn't have human ground forces anymore, but this one still uses human ground forces, and even those are light infantry... There are riot control drones and robots, so why doesn't the army directly use unmanned combat, or reduce the proportion of human ground forces? Furthermore, in the EVE Online universe, is it really that difficult to convert humans into clones? What are the technological barriers to mass-producing dust, Valkyries, and clones? Is there an explanation for why Rhodes didn't turn himself into a clone?

I hope the author continues to update this novel, "I Am Not Coolfly Raw Materials".

What type of book is the new book?