She Is a Ghost

This book is like a chicken bone to me—tasteless to eat but a pity to throw away. The author excels at subtle psychological descriptions, which I really appreciate and consider a plus. However, sometimes this skill also makes the writing feel redundant. The author dedicates considerable space to describing Qi Xin's godmother and the school security guard, briefly establishing these two characters through depictions of Qi Xin's inner thoughts. This serves as indirect characterization of Qi Xin, further reinforcing the reader's impression of her cold and aloof personality. However, these two characters are relatively minor, and the author's penchant for long, unbroken paragraphs makes the reading experience somewhat tiring. The main plot lacks compelling elements. Qi Ran is innocently dragged into the conspiracy from the very beginning; neither she nor the reader knows what's happening. Qi Ran is driven by life-or-death threats, and the reader is driven by the plot itself. In short, the beginning of the main plot lacks a truly engaging element—except for a few like-minded individuals. Horror elements. The author describes some horror scenes well, which is a plus, but it's only scratched the surface and doesn't explore those strengths further. A contradiction. What does survival mean to the Qi sisters, given their minimum and maximum goals? Beyond survival, what about kinship, love, and revenge? I see no further underlying motivations for the characters. The author could say it's unnecessary, but this clearly deprives the reader of a key element. If there is one, please reveal it to the reader as soon as possible. The romance subplot. The author is clearly very skilled at depicting delicate emotions, but only scratches the surface of the romance subplot, at least in the early parts I read—giving me the feeling of playing to one's weaknesses and avoiding one's strengths. In summary, I tried to write about everything, but ended up not writing anything well. The first episode is the most important and needs to be carefully designed to lure the reader in. Even if the writing is a bit rough around the edges later, the reader will just have to put up with it. It can attract viewers through the main storyline, the romance, or a standalone storyline unrelated to the main plot. It can use a combination of these, but at least one of them must be above average and capable of drawing attention.

I've read up to chapter 109 so far, and honestly, I can't really like Qi Xin. She lacks humanity and her words and actions are rarely heartless. But she's still within tolerable limits. But the part about cutting off the lake in the oil painting section really disgusted me. There are so many deserving victims throughout the entire text, why did they have to cut off the lake of a little girl who grew up in an orphanage? Speechless. The moral character assessment failed, 20 days/0, a major failure. The assessment indicated that the person was truly on the verge of collapse.

It's finished, right? Is Shennong in it?

Is it the dominant one or the submissive one? Stop with the jokes, I really want to know.

There is no reason to go back to the human world. The deceased are forever frozen in the past, leaving only those with deep-seated obsessions trapped in this warm hell, exchanging eternity for a peaceful and undisturbed companionship.

It's so beautiful! #(Crying)#(crying)#(crying)

Wow, that was amazing! A masterpiece!

It feels so dark; I can't really imagine a happy ending. #(Crying)

How many stickers are there?

I've subscribed to the whole thing and am looking forward to the author's next book. "Feeling Like I'm on the Same wavelength" is a book I've been reading for a year now, and it's been so enjoyable!