I Really Can Only Stop Time!

Dedicated to myself three years ago It's a really, really good work! Please feel free to read on. I promise I won't regret it.

A writing knife can But could you please describe the reactions of a normal person properly? The protagonist's own people massacred the elves who were treating him with courtesy (from the protagonist's perspective, which is also the perspective of the first-time reader). The protagonist is still empathizing with the murderers. Is this a normal human reaction? I don't expect you to give a proper explanation right now, after all, you need to lay the groundwork and create a plot twist. But could you please get her to say something like, "I have a reason to believe me/they are bad"? I can comfort myself with that, but what's the result? Everyone knows there will be a reversal, but different reversals will give people different feelings. The protagonist was completely used as a pawn, without any explanation whatsoever, a pure tool, and yet he had no emotions whatsoever. Fear, anger, resentment, or other emotions that should have appeared were completely absent, making him seem like a fake person. Then they try to create a lighthearted, everyday style. Doesn't that feel out of place? The protagonist's nonchalant attitude greatly amplified the negative aspects of the Elf Scroll, turning a minor problem into a major one, making it difficult for most readers to accept. No matter how many twists and turns occur later, they can't hide the protagonist's incredibly twisted thought process. It directly ruined the reader's sense of immersion, and no matter what you do afterward, you can never go back to the original style and rhythm. This storyline was consistently at the top of the bestseller list before, but after this, it became a complete flop. However, if it had been handled properly, this wouldn't have happened.

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This novel has been adapted into a comic! If you're interested, you can check it out on Bilibili Comics.

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