Awakening: Beyond the Nightmare

It has become a habit to save first and read later, to make up the word count

Not bad, suitable for passing time when you have free time

I seem to have said that the first part is okay, but the next few dozen chapters won't have anything to do with pig's feet. I'll delete it if it's not interesting. I'll continue deleting it.

Hey, missing persons, this guy from Nine Realms is so fast.

Friends who are short of books can take a look. It is well written, but it is too short! Nurture it first

The writing is okay, but there are too many regrets. If it doesn't change in the future, it won't be worth watching. . . .

It was uncomfortable to read. The first ten chapters were good, but suddenly I got to Xixi. It was really poisonous. After possessing her, she could affect the reality. I had to bear to read it, and then returned to modern times to not tell the truth in order to prevent her from disappearing. To prevent her from being freed was another big poisonous point. I don't know if the author had any explanation or explanation later. Is it good for her to let a ghost live with hatred towards her? After this point, to be honest, my feelings for the protagonist and the author suddenly dropped to freezing point.

Can't you write less about women? ? Are you going to start a harem? I originally thought this book was quite interesting, and it would have been nice to have a female protagonist, but you have too many female protagonists. Love one when you see one, keep one when you see one. Why don't you keep some men? It's a good book, but it's boring if it's all about girls.

First of all, it felt like it started too quickly, without introducing the background. When Lin Xi came to the protagonist for help, she directly said that there was a ghost, but she didn't say whether such things as ghosts had been disclosed before. The protagonist's first reaction was to run away without any suspicion. Later, when the protagonist rescued the official members, the official members followed the protagonist directly. I personally felt that I was at least suspicious. Is there no evil organization in this world? That's what I saw here. If I'm wrong, please remind me and I'll change the rating.

It's an assembly line novel, and the emotional scenes didn't move me at all. I think it's average. I gave it five stars simply because I think writing a book is not easy.