
Billion Technology Crystallization System
About This Novel
"2019 Free Hot Novel" Ye Fan unexpectedly obtained a billion-dollar crystal technology system. From then on, he became out of control. Android: You don't even have a mobile phone system, I'm going to make it impossible for you all to use your mobile phone! Ye Fan: Sorry, I have researched it, and it seems to be more powerful than yours! BMW and Mercedes-Benz: Our engines are world-famous! Ye Fan: Sorry, I don't have an engine, I only have magnetic levitation, and the speed is only a few times yours. Don't worry, take your time! ... Enemy: Is he still human? Who can stop this!
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Official(1106)Scraped 11d ago
Not much pussy
Thanos was reborn, and a few years later he regained the six gems and the Infinity Gauntlet, evaded the electromagnetic cannon, starved Wang Jingze to death, turned off Master Lu's plug-in, and fell in love with that damn sweet woman. Just when he was feeling proud. I heard a particularly terrifying voice: In the S1 season, I used the King of Skateboard Shoes.
In the first chapter, it was found that he lacked knowledge and made some common sense mistakes; In the second chapter, it was discovered that he had a wrong outlook on things. He refused to pay the rent he owed (at least one quarter), and felt that it was the right thing to do. When the landlord came to collect the rent, he had a bad and unreasonable attitude; In the third chapter, it was discovered that he had used the word inappropriately, specifically referring to "angry eyes." All the tasks posted on his website were solved. As soon as he gained fame and profit, as a website owner, where did his anger come from? So far, I have died from the poison. I only leave this post to warn those who come after me. If it helps, please leave a stick of incense...
Same age! Same mood! The same loneliness... A beautiful dream! It's just that we are pursuing different fashions. To be able to write such a good book, the author must have put in a lot of effort. Maybe behind the scenes that we don't know, the author has put in a lot of effort to present us such a beautiful novel.
Too watery
If there is such a company in reality, as a Chinese, I will definitely not criticize it. If you go and look at Huawei, in the novel, you can see that it is about eating and not fighting. As soon as an incident comes out, it is immediately criticized, and then an apology is made, and it is immediately criticized again. Is it interesting?
I have read more than 400 chapters and they are all the same routine, nothing new at all.
I have read more than 400 chapters, all of which are the same routine, and there is no freshness at all. All the routines are: invent something, get scolded, release something, pretend to be a b, and then solve the problem, what the hell, is there no other plot? The number of words is completely low, and the end of the previous chapter must be repeated at the beginning of each chapter. It is difficult to see this kind of writing. I am disgusted. If you have money, I recommend this book
Let's talk about the first few chapters
As a web article, the three golden chapters are indispensable. Just in the first few chapters of the author, let me talk about some of my views. First, the protagonist's character. The standard urban male protagonist character of the past few years. To put it bluntly, he is just a *slut who thinks he is very powerful. Personally, I hate such people. Even if he has a golden finger, he is still a loser. Second, the plot. Excessive, stereotyped slap-in-the-face plots make people feel sick, but the author rest assured, you are not alone. The author is advised to think differently. Science fiction lies in the exploration of the mysteries of the world and the discovery of the truth, rather than the various slap-in-the-face plots of others. Even if it is urban science fiction, please only use this type of plot as an embellishment and do not write it in too large a length. (The author is advised to read more books on physics and chemistry, which are always useful) Third, description. In a novel, apart from the plot, what is fascinating is the character setting, world view and the most important description. In particular, detailed description and comparison are extremely important. Judging from the first few chapters, the descriptions are blunt, the comparisons are exaggerated, and the various descriptions are extremely exaggerated. (I only read the first few chapters, this is just an evaluation of the first few chapters) Finally, I just want to say that art comes from life and is also sublimated from life. The author should not be too divorced from life. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
The routines are the same. No matter how powerful or invincible the protagonist is, as long as new technology comes out, someone will be the villain. This is nothing. The main thing is that he is a little-known trash. As long as he badmouths the protagonist and posts some evidence that can be faked, he can be directly posted on Weibo and the news, and then the protagonist will slap him in the face. This is all the routines in this book, without any exception. Killing decisively only kills insignificant little people. All villains with some status will not be killed unless they are ruined, and they will never be eradicated. As long as the villain runs away when the protagonist takes revenge for the first time, the protagonist will never take care of it, even if there is artificial intelligence, it will not pursue it. There is no innovation at all, the plot is exactly the same as almost all urban novels. The protagonist comes out, the villain looks down on him, and the protagonist slaps him in the face. The protagonist will never solve the problem in advance, which is very disgusting to watch.
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Official(1106)Scraped 11d ago
Not much pussy
Thanos was reborn, and a few years later he regained the six gems and the Infinity Gauntlet, evaded the electromagnetic cannon, starved Wang Jingze to death, turned off Master Lu's plug-in, and fell in love with that damn sweet woman. Just when he was feeling proud. I heard a particularly terrifying voice: In the S1 season, I used the King of Skateboard Shoes.
In the first chapter, it was found that he lacked knowledge and made some common sense mistakes; In the second chapter, it was discovered that he had a wrong outlook on things. He refused to pay the rent he owed (at least one quarter), and felt that it was the right thing to do. When the landlord came to collect the rent, he had a bad and unreasonable attitude; In the third chapter, it was discovered that he had used the word inappropriately, specifically referring to "angry eyes." All the tasks posted on his website were solved. As soon as he gained fame and profit, as a website owner, where did his anger come from? So far, I have died from the poison. I only leave this post to warn those who come after me. If it helps, please leave a stick of incense...
Same age! Same mood! The same loneliness... A beautiful dream! It's just that we are pursuing different fashions. To be able to write such a good book, the author must have put in a lot of effort. Maybe behind the scenes that we don't know, the author has put in a lot of effort to present us such a beautiful novel.
Too watery
If there is such a company in reality, as a Chinese, I will definitely not criticize it. If you go and look at Huawei, in the novel, you can see that it is about eating and not fighting. As soon as an incident comes out, it is immediately criticized, and then an apology is made, and it is immediately criticized again. Is it interesting?
I have read more than 400 chapters and they are all the same routine, nothing new at all.
I have read more than 400 chapters, all of which are the same routine, and there is no freshness at all. All the routines are: invent something, get scolded, release something, pretend to be a b, and then solve the problem, what the hell, is there no other plot? The number of words is completely low, and the end of the previous chapter must be repeated at the beginning of each chapter. It is difficult to see this kind of writing. I am disgusted. If you have money, I recommend this book
Let's talk about the first few chapters
As a web article, the three golden chapters are indispensable. Just in the first few chapters of the author, let me talk about some of my views. First, the protagonist's character. The standard urban male protagonist character of the past few years. To put it bluntly, he is just a *slut who thinks he is very powerful. Personally, I hate such people. Even if he has a golden finger, he is still a loser. Second, the plot. Excessive, stereotyped slap-in-the-face plots make people feel sick, but the author rest assured, you are not alone. The author is advised to think differently. Science fiction lies in the exploration of the mysteries of the world and the discovery of the truth, rather than the various slap-in-the-face plots of others. Even if it is urban science fiction, please only use this type of plot as an embellishment and do not write it in too large a length. (The author is advised to read more books on physics and chemistry, which are always useful) Third, description. In a novel, apart from the plot, what is fascinating is the character setting, world view and the most important description. In particular, detailed description and comparison are extremely important. Judging from the first few chapters, the descriptions are blunt, the comparisons are exaggerated, and the various descriptions are extremely exaggerated. (I only read the first few chapters, this is just an evaluation of the first few chapters) Finally, I just want to say that art comes from life and is also sublimated from life. The author should not be too divorced from life. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
The routines are the same. No matter how powerful or invincible the protagonist is, as long as new technology comes out, someone will be the villain. This is nothing. The main thing is that he is a little-known trash. As long as he badmouths the protagonist and posts some evidence that can be faked, he can be directly posted on Weibo and the news, and then the protagonist will slap him in the face. This is all the routines in this book, without any exception. Killing decisively only kills insignificant little people. All villains with some status will not be killed unless they are ruined, and they will never be eradicated. As long as the villain runs away when the protagonist takes revenge for the first time, the protagonist will never take care of it, even if there is artificial intelligence, it will not pursue it. There is no innovation at all, the plot is exactly the same as almost all urban novels. The protagonist comes out, the villain looks down on him, and the protagonist slaps him in the face. The protagonist will never solve the problem in advance, which is very disgusting to watch.

















