Complaint Record

Chapter reviews and book circles have packages that include a one-week ban and deletion of comments, so speak with caution! Regarding rice processing, it's my fault, I'm blind, I'll change it! This is another book written by someone who doesn't understand and is too lazy to look up the information, but actually writes it in detail. Without external power, your tricycle can run seventy or eighty yards and carry more cargo than most trucks. It can only be said that the protagonist is very strong and full. Your machinery is now even more powerful. Casting and cutting are integrated. Don't you want precision? Does energy saving 99 mean using 1% of the original energy to produce the same amount of electricity? If so, you are no longer a technology. You, the creator of technology, will have to kneel down and worship you as your teacher. With infinite matryoshka dolls, the electricity generated by a drop of oil can be used by people all over the world.

I've read more than two hundred chapters of this book, but I still feel awkward indescribably, so I might as well complain about it: ①The introduction says double talents. Combined with the title of the book, I thought it was two talents awakened. One of the talents is to double the effect of his talents or skills. The result is that two talents are awakened. ②In the previous chapter, it is clearly stated that skills can be learned after the realm is broken through and at the peak (consummation) before breaking through to the next realm, but the protagonist always forgets about the skill being learned at this time and that time. ③Although the protagonist's cultivation speed has accelerated, the plot development feels a bit delayed (point 3 is suspected to be the case, not sure). ④The protagonist's information is C-level secret, but it feels like no one with authority knows about it except the people who knew it at the time. ⑤ The issue of the Black Shark Cult feels like the result of deliberate laissez-faire by the federation. The protagonist also jumps repeatedly on this issue. The Saturn painter was able to read the soul memory that time, and he did not need to be beaten to death later (or the plot requires the protagonist to be wise). ⑥The protagonist always forgets to use his skills. According to the setting of this book, the protagonist can awaken four skills at the first level of the earth attribute star pulse. There are two golden finger star pulses at the first level. There are six in total at the first level. From level zero to level nine plus the king stage, there are 66 skills at level 11. It is understandable that the protagonist always forgets to awaken skills. (There are too many skills to write down😅😅😅)

I only saw Chapter 38 and couldn't stand it anymore. There is obviously a plug-in for breaking through the halo, but I don't use it. I just want to install B. But after writing and writing, I still don't need to use it. Since it is cheating, don't be a bitch and have to build a memorial. The acceleration halo plug-in is so useful that I can use the breaking halo to break through the current realm, but I don't want to be a cheat. Isn't it boring? Since the setting has these two hooks for the protagonist, either you don't use them. If you use them, don't be coy. Do you want to say that the protagonist doesn't want to use plug-ins, but he is forced to use plug-ins? This is not my intention. I wanted to talk about it in a book review, but it cost 500 points and I won't continue reading this book. There is no need to spend five dollars to review it.

The protagonist takes ten people out and kills a few people and is rewarded with a special reward by the emperor. Even if the official army is weak in the late Ming Dynasty, it is not to the point where a few enemy soldiers are rewarded with a special reward. The system in the article seems useless (quite rubbish) and there is a problem with the upgrade system. It also has the function of recruiting apprentices, but the apprentices are subject to skill level restrictions related to the protagonist's level. The apprentice's work does not provide any feedback to the protagonist (in terms of skills and experience), and the plot development is very abrupt. A running account of the development situation was copied and pasted (a number was changed), and statistical data on the development situation were frequently presented with word counts. The author (a seasoned veteran of several works) is very active in managing the deletion of comments. This time cannot be used to check for typos and straighten out the plot development... I was so upset that I posted three or four complaints about it in the early morning, but all of them were deleted. Huh(ˉ(∞)ˉ)hmph. This is a big part of the reason why I created this list of complaints.

I've only read a few chapters and can't stand it anymore. Space is calculated using squares. This is another one that pushed the author's elementary school math teacher to the ground and rubbed it. In daily life, when we talk about one side of water and one side of air, we all know that we are talking about cubic meters. Using squares to describe the size of the space, and some people forcefully explain the default height below, this makes people speechless.

Pat-on-the-head style writing method This book can be said to be a genre of science fiction writers (I can't say that it is representative, but it is one of them). It uses high technology as an extension of existing technologies in reality as the plot. However, there is insufficient understanding of this aspect. The performance setting of the quantum computer in this article is stronger than the current supercomputer, but it feels that it can be made up for by quantity. It has a strong feeling of "plastic" science and technology writing. To sum up, the author relies entirely on patting his head when writing a book. Firstly, he does not check the information, and secondly, he is too lazy to spend a few minutes to make up a new technical term. For areas that you don't understand, write based on your feelings. What you write really depends on your feelings!

I really can't stand it anymore. Electronic products are everywhere. It's so embarrassing. Forget about mp3s. Home theaters are coming out again. I can't stand it anymore.

After reading for a long time, I only saw one question, and it felt like I could write it out in a flash. Is it so troublesome to look up information on the Internet and copy from encyclopedias now? The details of technical implementation are all based on brainstorming. If you are writing about a lot of technology that transcends reality, you can rely on imagination. After all, no one knows it, and you don't need to have an IQ to read it. However, the technologies in your article (except for hacking technology, which is possible after all, mainly based on various technologies based on entities) are basically based on technologies that have been developed in reality. It is a bit nonsense to rely on brainstorming to write.

First of all, let me say that I only saw Yang's mother redeeming prescriptions for treatment of late-stage lung cancer. The familiar plot and the familiar ten-point points made me feel too embarrassed to read the rest. Personally, I feel it's a bit too toxic. In addition to the two sisters in the teaching plot, there are ten students in the back, and then it is just written as a running account? Both the title and the system of the book are related to education. As a result, business accounts for more than half, and education is briefly mentioned. It would be better to just cut off the education part and create a crazy system directly to start D's explosive life. The above opinions are only until I saw that Yang's mother had lung cancer and exchanged 10 points for medicine. I haven't watched the subsequent plot, so I won't comment.

I forgot the content, but the fault is the comment I posted after reading it Disadvantage 1: There is too much pretense, and the mental retardation halo not only makes the supporting characters mentally retarded, but the protagonist is also retarded. Anyway, the whole journey is either pretentious or playing house. I danced as I watched, and died of poison as I danced. Fault 2: Does the author think that people who buy and sell antiques can't even tell the difference between those fished out of the water and those fished out of the soil? Although I don't understand it, neither do professionals. It's so awesome that you can open an antique shop in an antique street. The author knows where such professionals are. Say, I want to take the bowl I eat at home to exchange for some money (I am too poor) (my bowl is also several years old)

I read it some time ago, and the writing was pretty good, but I couldn't get over the point of my complaints and it was too jarring, so I didn't read it. Disadvantages: If you want to be a licker, don't add Concubine Li into the story. Just say that it's better if your ex-girlfriend changes her mind. Chapter 282 and the previous two chapters are too poisonous. The author is really broad-minded. He met a cuckold in person and was able to help her when he was in trouble later. It's really good. In my opinion, in this situation, not only enemies, but strangers at the end of the day, is there a fourth kind of person besides licking dogs? If you are an enemy and you write pretense and slap in the face in these chapters, there is no big problem (except for boredom); what's the use of writing about strangers, it's almost 300 chapters already, what's the use of writing about a stranger who is a villain, you are not a supporting actress in a film and television drama. (I saw this during the free period, so I won't comment on the rest)

This book mainly tells the story of a protagonist who pretends to be a fool all the way. Let me talk about the advantages first: the subject matter is very attractive to me, and the introduction is well written (borrowed from the comments in the book circle). Here comes the bad point: the protagonist is always pretending to be cool, and the other characters are all enhanced versions of idiots, especially the female characters, who look like they have been trained in romance dramas with idiots, holding them back to the best. As a protagonist who has been reborn for more than thirty years, as soon as he meets the three villains Liu, Xu, and Li, he is reduced to a halo of intelligence and indecisive special effects... Next is a suspected bug: the two worlds merge but the electricity fails. In the case where the other world is the world of Xianxia, it would be okay if the description of thunder and lightning does not appear next, but if it does appear and it cannot come back, it will kind of rub the author's physics teacher on the ground... Some posts in this book's book circle have locked comments. Of course, comments on posts require fan points before you can post them.