
No Breathing While Playing
About This Novel
As a game anchor, Zhang Yi has cleared the level of "Escape", which is known as the most difficult horror game in history. Only four people in the world have cleared this game. Three months later, the four of them were invited to a villa in the suburbs of New York to participate in the review of Abyss Company's new game "Eye of the Devil". However, when night fell, they discovered that this new game seemed scarier than they imagined...
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Official(49)Scraped 8d ago
I feel like my IQ is being pushed to the ground and rubbed crazily by the author
First of all, the game played by the protagonist is a real death game, right? It's the kind of game where as long as you are killed, you will really die, right? Even so, the gold coins that the protagonist exchanged for his life did not think about how to use it to survive at the beginning, but thought about using it to exchange for 10,000 US dollars. Later, the author also said that he planned to save ten gold coins and exchange them for 10,000 US dollars. Also, this is obviously a death game. I just think about how to use it to gain fans, and I don't think about how to survive. Then everyone knows that this is a death game, and they are still so naive that they think that the little girl and the puppets are fine. After a game is over, they only focus on how many fans they have gained, instead of thinking about what the next game will be and how they can survive. I found this book quite interesting at the beginning. After the first game, I felt as if the protagonist had been subdued, which gave others a particularly awkward feeling.
The writing is good but the foundation is not enough
The benefits and risks of this book are obviously not directly proportional, and there is no sense of substitution. In today's world, things that are not beneficial can be avoided even though you know they are unavoidable, but you still feel uncomfortable. So I gave up after reading the first chapter of settling profits.
I really want to slap this little girl
As a passerby, the reason why I am walking
First of all, I was attracted by the introduction. I like horror game articles and decided to click in. The story theme is novel, which is one of the highlights. Then, after reading carefully, you will also find some unknown things, such as the actual logic is not explained well, and the key points and details of the live broadcast are also slightly mishandled. This is my little opinion. Please forgive me if something is not clearly expressed. I am not very good at writing reviews. Secondly, about "Devil's Game", this is the highlight that attracts me and makes me look forward to the start of the next game. However, if this point is not explained well, I think it will lose a highlight. Of course, our lovely people are indispensable here.
Forehead
The writing style and the plot and atmosphere are very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ That's it, the benefits and risks of live broadcast are not equal at all. As a result, I feel that the protagonist's personality is not very good, and the protagonist's IQ is definitely not particularly high. Obviously some things are not that troublesome.
nice
Based on my many years of experience in reading novels, this book is pretty good. The psychological activities of various characters are well described, but there are too few chapters to read.
Made me laugh so hard
I just said that your writing was not very good, and I kindly reminded you. I thought I was so awesome.
I feel like there are logical loopholes in the latest chapter
Since all game saves are interoperable and the player team has just been formed, how did they go to the fifth level to summon Isabel when the male protagonist was playing the fourth level? The fourth level is not completed yet. If someone else plays faster, according to this argument, the male protagonist does not have to play the fourth level.
If the protagonist had Ye Muhan's talent as an eighth-grade blacksmith, why would he need to rely on Isabel's protection?
? ? ?
In fact, the writing is okay, but why is it being broadcast live? I can't understand this. The live broadcast is really a failure.
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Community(0)
Official(49)Scraped 8d ago
I feel like my IQ is being pushed to the ground and rubbed crazily by the author
First of all, the game played by the protagonist is a real death game, right? It's the kind of game where as long as you are killed, you will really die, right? Even so, the gold coins that the protagonist exchanged for his life did not think about how to use it to survive at the beginning, but thought about using it to exchange for 10,000 US dollars. Later, the author also said that he planned to save ten gold coins and exchange them for 10,000 US dollars. Also, this is obviously a death game. I just think about how to use it to gain fans, and I don't think about how to survive. Then everyone knows that this is a death game, and they are still so naive that they think that the little girl and the puppets are fine. After a game is over, they only focus on how many fans they have gained, instead of thinking about what the next game will be and how they can survive. I found this book quite interesting at the beginning. After the first game, I felt as if the protagonist had been subdued, which gave others a particularly awkward feeling.
The writing is good but the foundation is not enough
The benefits and risks of this book are obviously not directly proportional, and there is no sense of substitution. In today's world, things that are not beneficial can be avoided even though you know they are unavoidable, but you still feel uncomfortable. So I gave up after reading the first chapter of settling profits.
I really want to slap this little girl
As a passerby, the reason why I am walking
First of all, I was attracted by the introduction. I like horror game articles and decided to click in. The story theme is novel, which is one of the highlights. Then, after reading carefully, you will also find some unknown things, such as the actual logic is not explained well, and the key points and details of the live broadcast are also slightly mishandled. This is my little opinion. Please forgive me if something is not clearly expressed. I am not very good at writing reviews. Secondly, about "Devil's Game", this is the highlight that attracts me and makes me look forward to the start of the next game. However, if this point is not explained well, I think it will lose a highlight. Of course, our lovely people are indispensable here.
Forehead
The writing style and the plot and atmosphere are very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ That's it, the benefits and risks of live broadcast are not equal at all. As a result, I feel that the protagonist's personality is not very good, and the protagonist's IQ is definitely not particularly high. Obviously some things are not that troublesome.
nice
Based on my many years of experience in reading novels, this book is pretty good. The psychological activities of various characters are well described, but there are too few chapters to read.
Made me laugh so hard
I just said that your writing was not very good, and I kindly reminded you. I thought I was so awesome.
I feel like there are logical loopholes in the latest chapter
Since all game saves are interoperable and the player team has just been formed, how did they go to the fifth level to summon Isabel when the male protagonist was playing the fourth level? The fourth level is not completed yet. If someone else plays faster, according to this argument, the male protagonist does not have to play the fourth level.
If the protagonist had Ye Muhan's talent as an eighth-grade blacksmith, why would he need to rely on Isabel's protection?
? ? ?
In fact, the writing is okay, but why is it being broadcast live? I can't understand this. The live broadcast is really a failure.















