Naruto, Be My Son

Author, be my son! Your dad is here

I gave up after reading just one chapter, but after thinking about it I couldn't help but come back to complain. The first sentence of your Konoha secret guard is, "Let go of the fox demon... Are you serious?" I have read Brainless Naruto Questions, and there are more than a dozen of them. You are the most brainless. At this stage, can the Human Power Pillar be exposed casually? What if this was a traitor from another village and you were exposed when you came up? At this stage, the Human Power Pillar is still the secret of every village.

In front of Naruto, there are many people who can kill Whitebeard, Hidan is one, Tendo Pain, and Uchiha Madara, Whitebeard is just a piece of trash.

I'm afraid you don't remember the fighting power of the pirates. The pirates are much bigger than Naruto. The fighting power of Broken Island is equivalent to destroying a big country with one blow.

Surprisingly beautiful (*￣￣) la la la la

Don't mess with Black Itachi. Itachi was indeed exterminated, but it was because the Uchiha clan was preparing to rebel against Konoha and start a civil war. On one side was the tribe and on the other was his own country. What could Itachi do? Since it is a clan member who is treasonous now, Itachi has no choice but to choose righteousness to kill his relatives to save Konoha Kingdom, so don't make a fuss about a righteous person here.

A typical series where you can tell the plot just by looking at the title... The outline is that after Whitebeard died, he traveled to the world of Naruto to receive his son and train the ninja world. The advantage is that it clears up some of Hokage's mother-in-law and mother-in-law affairs in a quick-cutting style. Some details are handled quite well and novelly. The first 100 chapters have a tight rhythm and the plot moves quickly. A variant of invincible flow. There are many shortcomings. First of all, the protagonist is another anime character. Although Whitebeard is very domineering and charming, the problem is that he is not a time traveler in the traditional sense. In addition, he is too old and his appearance does not meet the readers' aesthetics, making it difficult for people to feel like they are the characters. Secondly, it is hard to say which one is stronger or weaker in the Naruto One Piece system. For the story to develop, contradictions and conflicts are needed. Whitebeard is already at the peak of his powers as a pirate, and the author has given him a boost. As a result, the method of resolving conflicts from the very beginning is to use one-size-fits-all approach. If the opponent hits me but fails to break the defense, it means hitting myself. The invincible flow is refreshing, and it's really boring if you don't change maps or routines as time goes by; Then the other characters are too thin, and Naruto, as one of the protagonists, is carried along throughout the whole process, and he will do whatever he wants. There are no surprises and no subjective initiative. After recognizing his father, he became much stronger but rarely showed any signs of it. Kakashi followed him throughout the whole process, monitoring in name, but in fact he was a tool who sighed and was surprised at the scene, and also sent the information back to Konoha to let others sigh and be surprised. All the villains are extremely brainless, whether they are nobles or ninjas, they are just as stubborn as they are willing to give up; The last and most critical point is that the tone is too high. Whitebeard stands out because of his huge size. Within a few chapters, he abducts Naruto and beats up Uchiha and Danzo. He wanders away from the village in more than ten chapters. Within a hundred chapters, he single-handedly breaks through Kirigakure and crushes the Fourth Mizukage to death... After flipping through the table of contents for nearly 400 chapters, I am still writing about Naruto. I simply don't know how to develop in the future. You can't be invincible in the world, let's have enemies from heaven. In addition, there are a bunch of characters represented by the third generation of conspiracy theories. The actual attempt to kill the nobles is to encounter small problems such as a wave of robbery, single and repetitive routines, etc. In short, it's not very good. If you haven't seen this kind of routine before, you can read the first 100 chapters to try it out. If you are interested after 100 chapters, let's talk about it.

It is recommended not to accept these protagonists or characters who are already awesome. Just like Naruto, he will be the number one in the ninja world in the future and does not need the help of Whitebeard. Naruto's life can still be glorious without Whitebeard. If you want to accept characters who will be tragic in the future, changing their fate will make Whitebeard valuable. This way it is more enjoyable to write.

After reading a few chapters, I suddenly remembered that Ivankov can change people's gender, and will he turn Sasuke into a girl😑

This character setting is so funny that no matter what age you see it, will you just say "be my son" when you close your eyes? Hahahahahahahahahaha, Kakashi was confused, especially the sentence "pig brain overload" written by the author was so vivid hahahahaha