Looking at the Stars from Hogwarts

This is really the first time I've seen HP written like this, it's really good! Great, unlike other "nanny" stories, the protagonist group finally has their own wisdom! Science is the way to goI am looking forward to the next story.

I feel that the protagonist's sister is a bit willful, magic cannot solve everything, and there are only three of them who can do magic, but they are only in the second grade. There are many magics that they have not learned. In a strange environment, in order to make their own wands, they break away from the team to take unknown and dangerous things. They have no ability to protect themselves. If something powerful and dangerous is triggered, who can save her. Just this time, out of curiosity, she secretly followed the protagonist and her two brothers on an adventure and made her family worried. Did she ever think about it? ! !

After watching the first semester, I felt that the plot developed too fast, and it was more like an outline to promote the plot. Maybe it would be better if more details were written (personal opinion, everyone's reading experience and type are different)