Transform All Heavens and Return to One Sword

Mortal Flow is pretty good, much better than those mindless cool novels, and the characters' IQs are still online, which gives the author an encouragement. But there are a lot of typos, and they must have been read and revised after coding. The connection of chapters is a bit stiff, as if they are deliberately promoting the plot. I believe the author can write better, but I just didn't spend much time thinking about it. There are also some setting issues, such as how to practice any skills (there is no setting of veins and acupuncture points, and it is useless to have any requirements and restrictions for breaking through the realm). There is no explanation for the grading gap between the potential and ability of different skills. In addition, the setting to depict the restrictions is a bit confusing. , Is this only related to talent (can you recognize the restrictions in detail) and proficiency? There should be mana requirements for depicting multiple restrictions. It seems a bit unreasonable that the protagonist can depict 24-level restricted semi-magic weapons in the middle of the body training. This is not a problem of eyesight at all.

Don't you know how this killer organization found you? Do you think you can get away with it by changing your face? Do you think they saw you killing them? Hehe

Come and take a seat first. Let's talk about whether it looks good or not.

Compared to mindless writing, the book is good, but there are some typos