
About This Novel
"Red Leaf Sword" Chen Cheng, the world's number one black knight, the pioneer of the Hades Palace, the leader of Stia Styx, and the ex-boyfriend of Claire Ilnos, the goddess of the Western Underworld, has returned after rebirth. Our most beloved pioneer officer of the Western Underworld, Mr. Xiaohong, has four major weaknesses in his life: 1. He is ugly, which does not match the title of the book. 2. The personality is too enthusiastic and is often rejected thousands of miles away. 3. He is a poor player in game skills and appears mysteriously. He is not worthy of being called the Black Knight of the Underworld. 4. If you have bad luck, you always miss something. Ps: The above four points are all irony.
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Official(23)Scraped 8d ago
It's okay, but the pace is too fast, it makes my head hurt watching it
It can be seen that the author's writing is very good, but the plot moves too fast and some preludes are missing. For example, the protagonist has just killed a shadow assassin, and the next sentence becomes the protagonist's classmate asking the protagonist if he can play games. There is no scene change. For example, room 301 of the freshman dormitory building, and then write the dialogue of the roommate. There is no use... To separate this paragraph. Then it appeared. The protagonist was still killing people in the previous paragraph, and in the next paragraph, the roommate and the protagonist were discussing what games to play. In the previous section, the protagonist was eating with a girl, and in the next section, two people were enjoying the breeze on the mountain. The scene transitions were completely jumpy, like I was drinking tea in China and I was drinking coffee in the United States. These two sentences are put together, how did I get to the United States? I didn't write it, why did I go to the United States? It's not written, there are a lot of connecting sentences missing in the middle, and it reads very abruptly!
Damn, it looks good, I recommend it, guys.
I originally thought I would come back after taking a look and go to bed early, but I didn't expect it to be so damn good that I accidentally stayed up all night. Hey, the protagonist is handsome and aloof. He almost caught up with me. It was very immersive and developed very quickly. There was no slow pace. The only thing I didn't understand was that the heroine appeared out of nowhere. Maybe I watched it too fast and missed something. If you can, explain it. The heroine appears very quickly, which limits the layout. I think the goddess of the underworld can be developed into the heroine. Hehe, I like it. I haven't finished it yet. There may be some turning points later, but I still feel that the emotional aspect is not very clear. The main reason is that it is too immersive. Oh, I won't say it anymore, I have to keep aloof, cough cough
The content is okay, but the relationship is too troublesome. I find this emotional line annoying.
The author's writing style is more suitable for literature, such as centimeters per second
I feel like it's not suitable for online novels,,,,
A little confused
I started writing about the heroine's rhythm from the beginning, and I don't really like this kind of book.
Why is this book buried at the top of the page?
Is it because of the title of the book? It's obviously a very good book
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I won't comment from a personal standpoint. No one will believe it. I can only make suggestions. Those who are willing to see it will read it. Just telling you what I saw! People who don't believe you will naturally find the answer on their own! There is no way to be short of books.
Author, would it be better if you changed the title of the book?
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
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Official(23)Scraped 8d ago
It's okay, but the pace is too fast, it makes my head hurt watching it
It can be seen that the author's writing is very good, but the plot moves too fast and some preludes are missing. For example, the protagonist has just killed a shadow assassin, and the next sentence becomes the protagonist's classmate asking the protagonist if he can play games. There is no scene change. For example, room 301 of the freshman dormitory building, and then write the dialogue of the roommate. There is no use... To separate this paragraph. Then it appeared. The protagonist was still killing people in the previous paragraph, and in the next paragraph, the roommate and the protagonist were discussing what games to play. In the previous section, the protagonist was eating with a girl, and in the next section, two people were enjoying the breeze on the mountain. The scene transitions were completely jumpy, like I was drinking tea in China and I was drinking coffee in the United States. These two sentences are put together, how did I get to the United States? I didn't write it, why did I go to the United States? It's not written, there are a lot of connecting sentences missing in the middle, and it reads very abruptly!
Damn, it looks good, I recommend it, guys.
I originally thought I would come back after taking a look and go to bed early, but I didn't expect it to be so damn good that I accidentally stayed up all night. Hey, the protagonist is handsome and aloof. He almost caught up with me. It was very immersive and developed very quickly. There was no slow pace. The only thing I didn't understand was that the heroine appeared out of nowhere. Maybe I watched it too fast and missed something. If you can, explain it. The heroine appears very quickly, which limits the layout. I think the goddess of the underworld can be developed into the heroine. Hehe, I like it. I haven't finished it yet. There may be some turning points later, but I still feel that the emotional aspect is not very clear. The main reason is that it is too immersive. Oh, I won't say it anymore, I have to keep aloof, cough cough
The content is okay, but the relationship is too troublesome. I find this emotional line annoying.
The author's writing style is more suitable for literature, such as centimeters per second
I feel like it's not suitable for online novels,,,,
A little confused
I started writing about the heroine's rhythm from the beginning, and I don't really like this kind of book.
Why is this book buried at the top of the page?
Is it because of the title of the book? It's obviously a very good book
Comment
I won't comment from a personal standpoint. No one will believe it. I can only make suggestions. Those who are willing to see it will read it. Just telling you what I saw! People who don't believe you will naturally find the answer on their own! There is no way to be short of books.
Author, would it be better if you changed the title of the book?
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh


















