From Star Abyss

Compared with mechanics and A Guangbi next door, they are much worse. The main problem is the early rhythm and various twists. You must know that the poisonous point of many people now is the inexplicable Virgin Bitch, which is very frustrating.

This book has a grand world view and a novel setting, so to speak. Readers who are looking for similar books on mechanics can definitely try this book as a source of food. Whether to become a god or not is yet to be decided, at least the holes left in the early stages must be filled. There is a certain gap between the author's ratio and Qi Shijia ratio. Therefore, the protagonist's performance from the player's mentality to integrating into the world is a bit stiff. It can be understood that emotions are not shown externally. But because of this, the change in behavior style seems abrupt. The author's scene description skills are very good. I saw passages with a strong sense of imagery. Pictures can be formed in the mind. The emotional portrayal of the characters, except for the protagonist's problems, is also very good. The most controversial. From the bombing of his home planet to the inability to accept biochemical experiments, the change in the protagonist's mentality is not reflected, but the later explanation is understandable. The person who blows up the star is the hero. Such an image of the protagonist. It seems neutral and just, which is much more reasonable. I hope the author can keep writing and perfect the grand epic. After all, the background structure is wild and imaginative. From the previous chapters, you can see that the background is not weaker than the foundation master. I hope the author can control it. I also hope that readers will not be put off by the strange comments and can calm down and read the book.

The story is okay, the outline is okay, but the author thinks that the novel is too anime-oriented, which makes me feel that some things are complicated and difficult to read. I can't understand a lot of things in reading, and the writing is too complicated to express with many pictures and animations. The novel is not good❌, I feel uncomfortable reading it, especially the mixture of games and reality.

Although the structure of the world structure is okay, the character of the protagonist cannot be complimented. So what if the baby who is not related to you is abused, and it does not affect your interests. As for Hong Wen? If you don't have a firm value stance, how can you embark on the path of becoming strong? This is so far behind the Great Love Immortal, even a passer-by supporting character. If this was thrown into the Gu world or a mortal, he would not survive more than three chapters.

In general, does the protagonist's character change over time? You were talking about killing people without batting an eyelid and treating these as games. Why did you suddenly smash the table out of anger or just go straight to Hong Wen? Why are these fifty chapters as abrupt as changing the protagonist? How can a person who cold-bloodedly treats everything as a game and kills without batting an eye suddenly become so angry? There is no psychological description at all. Because the mutation damaged the brain? It's not that you can't accept changing the protagonist, at least you have to explain why? There is also the issue of the small number of Starborne Divisions. Why do you keep talking about it? In more than fifty chapters, at least one-tenth of it is said about such trivial things, which made me tired of reading it. It's such a trivial matter. If you don't want to play with it, don't play it. Why do you keep mentioning it? I have already said that this is a completely rubbish career. Upgrade it to five levels and add two attribute points. If you don't like playing, you will force others to play. What I don't understand the most is this kind of cold-blooded protagonist, chatting about games and talking about the game, looking at the living teammates in front of him, thinking that the other party's garbage talents will be used up and then thrown away. Just this kind of pig's feet, did people get angry later?

Liz thought he was in the game, but what he didn't know was that he couldn't get out of the game now. My current identity is completely different from my previous identity in the game.

The author describes the protagonist's character as very bad. First, we are watching a new player come into the game to show off and play with the two worlds to strengthen himself. Secondly, you want to describe the human side of the protagonist, but don't you think it's too rigid? You said that the protagonist has lived in this world for several years and there are people who treat you well. You feel a sense of belonging and I can respond. After all, my previous life was only twenty years old, and this world can bring me better rights and different people than my previous life. Please tell me why you are angry. I really can't understand someone who has just traveled to the background world of the game. In the previous game, he randomly exploded stars and killed people, and suddenly became angry because of death just because he came to this world. You said that the emotional resonance that is 100% simulated in the game world should have existed in previous lives, right? Now we are all moved and resonate with the pictures on the screen. In the end, isn't a 100% simulation game more resonant than this screen? It was the same thing in the previous life. The protagonist was capable of killing people and exploding stars randomly. Maybe the game only had mosaics of corpses at the most. But the protagonist is no different from the consciousness transmission player now. He only has one life and no mosaics. When describing the emotional line that suddenly resonates with the protagonist, think about the past life where it was said that the game world was 100% simulated and the corpses might be mosaics. As a result, when I came to 18+ and there was no mosaic world, I suddenly felt resonance and anger with the game world. Shouldn't I have used it up when I played the game before?

There are too many psychological descriptions. At least in the chapter I read, most of them are psychological descriptions plus objective psychological descriptions. In addition, the main character's muttering verbal descriptions are also sideways psychological descriptions. Anyway, in some places, the whole book is basically reflections or something, which makes people wonder whether 500,000 of the more than 2 million words are psychological descriptions.

The subject matter is good, but the author wants to create a writing style similar to animation. However, the early setting of this kind of interstellar novel requires a lot of supplementary scenes, which makes it very tiring to read. Moreover, the author's animation-like writing makes the characters "talk too much" and the main plot advances slowly, making it more and more annoying to read. Secondly, the character change of the protagonist is a bit stiff. In the first moment, he was directly reborn in the game world as the fourth natural disaster that kills people without blinking an eye. In the next second, he directly forcibly fights the BOSS for a baby that has nothing to do with him. You can describe a protagonist becoming more humane, but not in this way. Also, the protagonist's profession requires a large number of players to join, but the reason given is not very reasonable because more people have more say and can have a place in the interstellar world. However, the author likes to mention it every three to five times. To be honest, it greatly affects the viewing experience.

The protagonist may have a tendency to love babies, so he will get angry when seeing his beloved things being ruined.