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So far it looks okay, I hope the author will keep it up

After reading a few chapters, I realized that the author is just a pretentious young man, and the protagonist he wrote is also a young man who kills people and pretends to be old because of his age. The author has no idea how bad he is, and he is still moving and enjoying himself, which makes me heartbroken.

The most important thing in writing is persistence. The more chapters you write, the more people will read them. Gold will always shine.

What a great idea and writing style. I hope it doesn't collapse. Keep up the good work! I am also in a book group, and I learn from my book friends.

A good book that requires patience to read. It is suitable for experienced book lovers who are in a book shortage.

There's an old man at the beginning, so there shouldn't be a female protagonist, right? ! ! Right!

But I feel that the righteous way of Shushan is too beautified and righteous, and it feels unreal. Write something more realistic about the conflict of interest between the righteous way and the side demon sect.

A little more humane, a little less brainless, not bad, not bad, worth watching

The beginning of this novel is very good, with a touch of ethereal feeling. Later (after 20 years), it is said that it was glorious in the past, but it broke the feeling of cultivating immortals and seeking Taoism, and then being suppressed by immortal cultivators. Well, it feels like it has become popular! There is a feeling that the protagonist has an aura of ridicule, and the whole world cannot develop without crushing the protagonist. It is a bit disappointing to be inferior.

Author, what do you think of your classical Chinese writing? How is your literary talent? I don't know why. I couldn't understand it after watching it for a while. The words used were too abstruse. It was too uncomfortable to watch. I pulled it out.