
Tan Clan Immortal Clan
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The path to immortality is ethereal and long. Tan Gaoming was reincarnated into the Tan family and became a member of the foundation-building force. Let's see how he stepped into the immortal path with the three spiritual roots. He relied on the true fire of the sun to refine elixirs, practice magic, and kill powerful enemies, leading his family to become an immortal clan.
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Official(5)Scraped 2mo ago
Dear author, there are two failings in your novel. The first point is that they are all members of the same family. They talk to the elders of the family and call themselves juniors. How out of touch do they have to be? Can't you call me uncle? The second point is that the male protagonist kills someone and digs up the soil to bury the body. Isn't it a bit funny? They are all cultivators, and they don't know how to destroy the body with just a fireball!
Now it's repeated at every turn, and won't it be modified in the future?
There are too few updates, can't I guarantee that I can't even write one chapter a day?
Don't fall into the trap. No book you write is ever finished.
It's pretty good. A bigger layout would be better.
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Official(5)Scraped 2mo ago
Dear author, there are two failings in your novel. The first point is that they are all members of the same family. They talk to the elders of the family and call themselves juniors. How out of touch do they have to be? Can't you call me uncle? The second point is that the male protagonist kills someone and digs up the soil to bury the body. Isn't it a bit funny? They are all cultivators, and they don't know how to destroy the body with just a fireball!
Now it's repeated at every turn, and won't it be modified in the future?
There are too few updates, can't I guarantee that I can't even write one chapter a day?
Don't fall into the trap. No book you write is ever finished.
It's pretty good. A bigger layout would be better.









