The Authentic Taoist Sect of Shushan

There are a lot of logical explanations without plot. When I saw that I was sleepy, I kept expounding some Taoist and Buddhist theories... Master, are you writing a paper?

Oops, I can explain something clearly in just half a sentence. It's not an ordinary problem to insist on writing a few nonsense words.

I didn't write a scene, just a few sentences for the scene, and a few pages of useless explanations. After reading the explanation, it's the next scene, and then I find that I have almost forgotten the previous scene😕

Are you writing a novel or a thesis on Shushan? Various explanations, so much nonsense, what are you doing? This is, write a novel, just write it! Baffling

Write less about irrelevant topics. Often there are only a few sentences in a chapter that are connected to the plot, and the other words have no use.

The notes are running down, without any vivid writing style, it feels like I am reading a textbook...

I feel like there's a lot of nonsense and the writing style is a bit poor.

Why write so many off-topic introductions? It affects the quality of the book.

There is a lot of saliva at the beginning, Luo Liba is so verbose that I can't understand it.

It is recommended that the author re-write a novel with the theme of Shushan. The protagonist of this novel is too big and too early, and there are too many explanations and too little plot. However, the author still understands the plot development of Shushan very well.