Poison Repair

Li Shuidao Li Shuidao Li Shuidao, hey~ It's a very interesting book. The story revolves around the Five Poisons. Later, the concept of virtual realm was added. When you advance, a world will be opened up where you can DIY your own cultivation. This book can be divided into two parts, one is the plot of the author in the world of Wudu Sect (chapters 1-538), and the other is the plot after the author escapes from the world (ends in 539-639) (Chapter 1-538) The plots in the early stage are okay and quite interesting. After reading each chapter, the Five Poison Gate, Tianchi Square, Miaoyin Pavilion, Dragon Bone Tai Sui, Nanhai, Ziyang Gate, the framework is also there, and the content is also above average. (Complete in 539-639) After running out of the world after becoming invincible in Novice Village, the framework was messed up. This is a book with the theme of poisonous cultivation. In chapter 539, after running out of Novice Village, the cultivation system became Buddhist. After 100 chapters, the author ended it. It is probably because the framework was messed up and he couldn't finish writing. The cultivation system in the book is divided into nine levels. When the author ran out of the world, he was probably the True Lord without Form (level 4), so my impression is still at level 4, which means that there is a big framework of levels 5 to 9. In fact, it can be written, but it is over, so I am quite sad, hey ~ Blue Slim Shiitake Mushroom I am an old bookworm, and it is rare to see a relatively new book. This book is above average, not too bad, not too good, and has some flaws. It can be used as a ration book. Just read Chapter 539 and then think about the content by yourself: the protagonist saves the original world and then unifies the new world. The overall framework is as shown in the figure

It's not that the five poisons cannot overcome each other. What I want to say is whether the author's writing is too rigid and too absolute. Some of the plots are too coincidental, so I am too lazy to talk about it. What is the key? The conflict between the five elements is too absolute. If it is said that metal generates water, does it mean that metal generates water? I hit you with something metallic, but you are a water-shaped poisonous body, so you are invincible? ! There is something called high merit deceiving reason, but the author only considers that high reason deceives merit. What's wrong? If I am a water attribute Qi training monk, can I be immune to the attacks of metallic Nascent Soul old monsters? I'm just speechless. Well, guys! If you don't believe it, it can't be considered a coincidence in the previous chapters, and I won't say it either. Coincidences don't make a book, right? For example, excerpt from Chapter 17-- He used the smallest movement to block eight sword attacks, but the price he paid was poisoning. Scorpion poison! Scorpion poison corresponds to gold poison, and Li Shuidao is a water poisonous body influenced by the same ginseng toad. The five elements of metal generate water, so although his skin was scratched and poisoned by scorpion poison, it was actually nothing serious. --- Even if metal generates water, there is a process of transformation. If you are harmed by scorpion poison, you are really immune because of mutual symbiosis. Let me go, are you so awesome? There is a transformation process. You have to receive some toxic damage first and then become immune again. No! And why is it absolutely metallic? Can't a scorpion have composite attributes? That jade toad of yours, I said, has the dual attributes of wood and water. How come?

Five elements system theory, reasonable! But can things that don't belong to the same system be forcibly mixed? Changing the prescription casually... Awesome! The master's wife was still asking for secrets before, but later she was able to steal secret books and give them to the protagonist, just to find the Cowherd... Weird! The protagonist's wife changes so quickly. One moment she wants to live or die, the next moment she wants to have a baby... Fickle! A monk who has just gained mana breaks into a cultivating family and kills a mortal and an elder of the protagonist (that is, a monk who must have mana. It is said that even if he does not feed spiritual creatures for five years, he can almost advance to the intermediate level and obtain mana!). This is really... Violation!

Basically, I could read it before Chapter 200, but after the construction of Tianchifang, I gradually stopped watching it.

But there are also many problems, such as the scene with the teacher's wife. The problems he wrote are not big, but the joints are lackluster. For example, I don't know if it's a contradiction between being cautious or not daring, but being bold at the same time. I know clearly that my wife will be disliked after being rejected many times (I'm being polite), and they have the power of life and death over you. You only have so much choice. It's okay if you take it easy. You cut it! I don't want to analyze it further. I just wanted to show that I was on target. One more sentence. Don't just write about the main character Yi Nuan, no matter... You won't read it.

What I wrote completely deviated from the topic. I wrote about poisonous cultivation and then completely practiced Buddhism. I don't understand it.

First of all, the realm is too low. It is quite similar to the Taoist Tiger. In order to practice, you must first contract a spiritual tiger. Moreover, the realm is the highest golden elixir stage. It is considered a low-level world. Moreover, this family is too selfish! Although he is a demon cultivator, he does not have the feeling of a demon cultivator.

Interested book lovers should not be misled by the reviews before reading. My member has read Chapter 300, and the overall impression is that I can understand the author's characterization. Main tags (personal): mortal stream, magic cultivator, family, sanity online (emphasis on personal interests)

There were too many typos, and Li Shuidao became Li Shuilang of the same clan. Sometimes they say scorpions are metal, and sometimes they say centipedes are metal. Looks awkward

What the hell? His wife is trying to kill him with poison. The protagonist has no reaction at all. He still loves his wife anonymously.