Shendiao: I Learned How to Move Around the World

Is the protagonist out of his mind? To stand up for Master Wanzhai, Shaolin's pursuit of secret learning has been reported everywhere in the world. What is the protagonist pretending to be Why not go to the Shaolin Temple to dismantle it

Say it first: When the author writes normally, he still has that martial arts flavor. Although it can be felt that the writing power is sometimes weak, like Ouyang Feng's part, the Western poison was established in the early stage, but it soon changed and completely served the protagonist's upgraded plot. But this is just innocuous, just a little polishing. And then there's the bad stuff: That episode of Yanziwu, They would rather create original characters but also have to foreshadow it, add mechanical narratives every other chapter, and also make Dugu Qiubai the second creation of Murong Fu's son, trying to inject elements of "Dragon" into "The Condor". The result? Just because I can't stand the opinions of some readers, It takes more than ten chapters to create a BOSS character who does not hesitate to change the original plot but also wants to be original. It was written that he was seriously injured, hid in a secret passage, and was stabbed to death by the protagonist. I'm not making a generalization, this is what the author wrote in the original article - the BOSS is coming, the protagonist is on board, the enemy is seriously injured but cannot escape, and is killed by the protagonist's sword; From the moment the protagonist draws his sword to the moment the boss dies, there are a total of one hundred words, divided into eight sentences and eight lines. As long as you read more about fight scenes in novels, you will know how abstract it is. There is really no description at all. I will leave the outline to you. Finally, I really don't want to say too bad things, and I really don't want to give too low a score. There are always three points for bad books, but you are better, At that time, I was told that my mentality was broken, so I just wrote this kind of thing. Who hasn't made a mistake yet? But now, almost a year has passed, and the book has reached one million words. It's not like you have to find an editor for the paid chapters, and you still haven't revised the free chapters. It's disgusting that more than 30 chapters are still there. What do you mean? I can't understand, and I don't want to understand. If you really want to, go and learn from Wufang Lolita, and it would be better if you learn from Wenxinggong.

The plots of Lu Wushuang transforming into a child and the protagonist transforming into a child are so vicious that even fast forwarding will make you feel like vomiting.

The novel is actually well written, but the main line is scattered and the priorities are not distinguished, which makes the novel less attractive and lacks tension. A novel should take the protagonist as the main line of action and then continue to extend it. However, many contents of this novel often leave the protagonist aside for a large amount of description, such as Li Mochou, Li Shentong, and Mingjiao. Anyway, a lot of pen and ink is spent on writing and Throwing aside things that have nothing to do with the protagonist. This kind of writing method was not a problem in the early period when martial arts novels were popular. But now readers are pursuing pleasure. You have written many chapters, but the protagonist's strength has not increased at all, and the protagonist has no adventures. You just write some messy things. Can it attract people? This is the reason for the failure of the work.

In fact, the world of the Divine Condor should be written around the main line of "a great hero, serving the country and the people". As a time traveler, with foresight, we should unite all the forces that can be united, form a team, block the general trend of Mongolia, and rebuild China. This is what everyone wants to see, rather than trivial trivial matters every day, which is meaningless

I found that the current novels just like to talk about Xiao Feng. I don't know what the inside story is.

The writing is good, and it was a bit interesting at first, but the subsequent plot is a bit dull. The main plot advances too slowly and is full of side plots, which makes it a bit boring to watch

What the hell, just one Condor can write more than 400 chapters without traveling to other worlds. Just look at the number of chapters to tell how rich it is. The content of The Legend of Condor Heroes is only so much. Even if it is to highlight the protagonist and extend the story, two hundred chapters is considered too much.

Who is the heroine? Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu have no emotional basis. Can Xiao Longnu be written as the heroine? Author

This novel doesn't even have a DB, it's amazing