Tokyo: You Call This Normal Equipment?

The writing style looks very comfortable, and it's fully subscribed. It's really good-looking, but the only drawback is that the author likes to press. A shogi game felt like a pretty good and exciting game. If it were written in one go, it would be quite enjoyable to watch. However, the author divided it into a weekly game. In the first week, a male villain came to ridicule, and in the second week, the male villain was solved. Many chapters have passed in the middle. I can only say that there is some excitement, but it is really not exciting enough. And there is the Kondo Mirai. I understand that he will definitely be slapped in the face later, and I am sure that the author will write it later, but there are too many scenes. This girl, who may be the female villain, has been secretly taunting and looking down on the protagonist in her heart. Although the protagonist has shown some strength, such as shogi games and baseball games, this female villain is still down to luck, and she still looks down on her, because the protagonist has no money and no future. It feels like this female villain has a stamp of thought. The shogi game was won because the opponent made too many mistakes, and the baseball game was won because the opponent was just a genius in the school. The protagonist only practiced for one day. It must be bragging. He must have practiced in private for a long time. But according to ordinary logic, according to the author's description, the protagonist's opponent should be a genius in the school. The genius in baseball seems to be a minister. I can't remember clearly. All in all, this female character has a lot of roles. Maybe she is a long-term target arranged by the author? But the female character has always been made to look down on the protagonist. The protagonist has achieved two achievements so far. When he found out, she looked down on them and suppressed them all the time. Although it is true that the desire to advance is suppressed first, but if it is suppressed for too long, it does feel a little resentful. Maybe the author can change the attitude of this female character a little bit? The chess game was indeed won by a child for the first time. Although he was said to be the child of the Dragon King, the child was very strong, but to outsiders he seemed to be the protagonist. With good luck, when it came to the baseball game, he was defeated by a baseball player who was somewhat famous in the school. Maybe this female character could change her view of the protagonist a little bit. Even if she mentioned it a little, she was just being tough, right? I still think that the protagonist is completely bragging and luck, but I can say through psychological description that I feel that the protagonist is indeed a little different. Then next time the protagonist accomplishes something that the female character cannot believe, and then goes to investigate in person and completes a small slap in the face, maybe she will not be so depressed. I accidentally wrote a lot. The author's novel is indeed very good, but in terms of the fun points, I personally feel that the division is a bit too serious. A complete fun point was interrupted into pieces, especially the flag competition. I hope that after the audition and the official competition, I can finish it in one go and write a complete fun point, so that the protagonist can slightly change the outside world's view of him. This will be good.

Mainly in terms of plot advancement, it has almost reached a million words from the beginning to now. Except for the temporary incident of baseball, no plot advancement has ended. For those who follow it, there is a feeling of depression that cannot be released. When a reader reads a novel, he will actually have some foresight of the next step in many plots, and will have expectations for the author's next writing. If this expectation can be satisfied in a short period of time, then the reader will have a great sense of satisfaction. Even if the author does not actually advance the plot according to his own encounters, at least the reader's expectations for a certain plot will be relieved by the result. This kind of problem often occurs in groups of slow-heating or detail-oriented authors. It is a "master's disease". The solution is also very simple, which is to update in large quantities. As long as there are enough updates, so much that slow-burning can make people feel happy, then all deficiencies will be solved. 🐶

Unknowingly, the number of female protagonists and female supporting actors has reached 2 digits. It feels good to keep adding more. Can you really grasp the size if this continues? Don't end up with a bunch of featureless vases then.

The writing is not bad, but there is too little!

The writing is still very good, keep up the good work

Not bad, good, monthly tickets are provided. Update soon. . . . ..

The writing is okay. Although it has always been a bit low-level, it doesn't matter. It's a modern city. I think it's not too much to slowly fall in love and pretend to be cool. It's very comfortable.

Be more careful. Others will see it and think we look down on it.

Did the author have any other vests before? What was the name of the previous book?

Open a new account? ? ? I asked why I didn't see any new books from Big Skull?