Tokyo Sick Girlfriend

I hoped that my girlfriend would continue to work and earn money after getting married, but I found that she just wanted to stay at home full time! ! The same thing happened to another girlfriend! ! After we broke up, they were able to go to work and still refused to let me go? !

I feel like the writing on this subject is pretty good, it's very comfortable to watch and very everyday.

Four heroines My yarn weaving has three wins, one is spiritual victory, the other is physical victory, and the third is the three-year agreement.

After reading it, I can say that overall, the first three quarters are very good. The awkward psychology between the heroines is well controlled. Those who like Shura Field will enjoy reading it. It obviously slows down later on. This can be seen from the plot arrangement. The plot of the male protagonist Guangda's first year takes up most of the book. The pace of the book takes off in the next three years. One chapter is the same as the previous fifty chapters. It is obvious that he is busy rushing to finish the plot early. Especially in the section where Takahashi discovers that the male protagonist has a system until the end, the male protagonist's design is very broken, and the endings of the other characters are not explained. The character of Airi feels designed to be useless (is this considered a missing character?) To be honest, it is unfinished. Maybe the author himself can't control it well. He has already thought about the beginning and the end, but he has no idea of ​​how to develop in the middle and late stages, so he just writes whatever comes to mind... In addition, he has to change the plot, and in the end he doesn't want to write it anymore... Many foreshadowings are not recycled... But it is still worth reading. If you read it for a few nights, you can just abandon it when the plot starts to feel boring. You can also leave a souvenir for yourself without watching the ending.

This book is well written. The only problem is that the protagonist is too naive. I really rarely see a protagonist who is born like this. Really, he uses his current girlfriend and ex-girlfriend as decorations, and then treats his first love with all kinds of pampering and understanding, which is very different. Moreover, the first love is not really silly and sweet, but also quite insidious. . . .

It's pretty good. I hope you'll continue to update it.

Watch it for a while and give it a four-star rating. It feels like it could be used as a joke collection

The game of Twisted Shura is high, and the career line is also developing slowly. It's handsome. If you like this kind of subject, it feels great at first glance. The only drawback is that the word count is too small.

I can read it, the expression is clear, and no logical loopholes have been found yet. It is a rare good article.

You started well, keep writing, buddy