Start as a Blind Beggar and Add Points to Become a God

I have been reading about this author for a long time and he is finally getting married soon. I wish the author a son soon and a happy marriage.

I thought you were going to save that Xiaozhi, it's so outrageous

I can't comment on this book. I became a disciple out of nowhere. I was told to go to Penglai, and on the way I was told that I was lonely. I heard that I worshiped him as soon as I went to Shushan. The master accepted it as soon as he saw that he could play the flute, and he didn't care where the protagonist came from. There is also a plot of abuse of the main character. The two little girls are gone. These plots cannot save you, so what is the point of sudden rage? You wrote about cultivation, but you didn't write about the path to cultivation. The protagonist seems to be invincible, and he is very good at crotch, so he knows that he can reach level 10 in seconds. After becoming a disciple, he is like an artist who plays the flute and makes wine. He doesn't write about fighting. When he writes about it, he just shoots a knife. I can't tell what the main plot is. I wonder if the author has an outline.

It's very interesting. I hope the author can keep it free.

It's still a bit level, it would be better if it was more original.

The narrative novel I saw on Douyin is quite good. I have never read such a novel before, and it is very novel to me. The tragedy of the story makes people sympathize with it. The protagonist is heroic and does justice without asking for anything in return, which creates a very good character. I watched the video on Douyin because of the pictures, and the accompanying explanations made me feel very perfect. Although I haven't read this novel yet, it's the first time I've seen such a good novel on Douyin. I'm very surprised. I hope the author will keep up the good work😘

The content is still good, but the details still need to be polished! For example, fighting can be made more exciting and exciting, and you can think of some gorgeous moves. If that doesn't work, you can look at those of Jin Yong and Gu Long! Plot and dialogue are important, but you can also describe some scenery appropriately, as the saying goes, using scenery to describe people! Also, when a character appears, to better highlight the characteristics of the character, describe more facial features, body shape, clothing, etc., So that people can remember it better!

Telling it loudly, it feels pretty good

It's very well written. I like it so much. Give the author a mua

A very rubbish novel, really rubbish. This is the first novel I have reviewed in my 15 years of reading experience.