Building a Salvation Organization from Scratch

· It's very difficult to write this type of book well, so let's say that this "system" appeared because the abyss monster has been thinking about this planet, and asked [Chen Sheng] to come to save the world, and it had to be disguised as an ancient mysterious character? Then every time the monster is destroyed, it disappears, and then everyone's memory is erased! In order to understand the mysterious origin more closely, you can also travel through time and space to teach [Aya] how to save the world 2,500 years ago! A few days after returning, Aya, who had been sleeping for more than two thousand years, traveled through time and space and came to the present, and summoned the earlier heroic spirit [Erlang] out again! Not long after, they rescued the bodyless "Shou Min" who also died! We went to the Tang Dynasty 1,400 years ago to abduct the simple little monk [Xuan Zang] and Bai Gu (Bai Jingjing)! A few days after returning, Xiaobai crawled out from under the peach tree! Then he rescued Xuanzang who was sleeping and dying! He also summoned heroic spirits such as "姮奥" and "Chang". Then he traveled through time and space twice and picked up two daughters, "Chen Yidian" and "Chen Tiya"! Later, there were nuclear explosions (Godzilla) and improvements (Kun) to become mythical beasts! What else is the "Eternal Gun"! Especially the super Hibiscus Tree and the very small Space-time Fruit! Fuso fruit can make people enter the transcendent world, and space-time fruit can kill level nine monsters! The hibiscus tree can produce "Ten-Day Golden Crows"! Time and space can break the path to advancement! There is also the contaminated "Godzilla" who gained the consciousness of the earth and later evolved into the true god "Gothra"! Later became the second batch of students of {Yong Zhou} The [Bai Yu] family in this world is the descendant of the White Bone Demon. Because Chen Sheng changed his destiny and his brother [Bai Tao] joined Yong Zhou, then who is in charge of the Bai family? Chen Sheng spent ten years traveling to nearly 10,000 parallel worlds to find an alliance! "Eternal Day" has been established in all walks of life! It also led many people to join Chaofan It took him two thousand years to advance to level ten! There was no counterattack at all in the abyss, just killing the biggest boss? Did more than two billion human beings die in vain? Just forget about those devoured planets? In the end, only the person who died in Yongzhou was saved, alas! It has been so powerful for more than two thousand years, it seems that it only fights for loneliness After transcending into a wider starry sky, it seemed like he never came back? Don't you care about the people or mythical beasts in the back garden anymore? He is fully capable of leading a group of extraordinary beasts into the abyss! And he never seemed to want to start a family [Yong Zhou, due to systematic fraud, the situation turned into a myth! Derif, Gaia, Zhang Zihang, Owens, Russell, Romero, Martha, John, Xu Liping, Philip, Braun...

Dear author, the later plot is really weak. I would like to make two suggestions. First, regarding the myth of heroic spirits, I suggest you refer to the Valkyrie at the end and write more world legends, which will look very awesome, instead of remaking the Journey to the West theme every day, which is too boring. Second, in terms of crisis, the writing should be graphic and describe more about how ordinary people, ordinary institutions, and the government deal with it. It should be like a science fiction blockbuster. The scene should be destructive, rather than every time: crisis occurs - the government and ordinary people are powerless - the boss waves his hand - a successful ending - proud and moved - the foundation increases...

A book friend in the book review section said that the plot has begun to speed up, is it about to end? My answer is: It is indeed ready to be finished, so the plot is accelerated. The main reason is that my writing is getting worse and worse, and my grades are getting worse and worse. There is no need to keep procrastinating and spending money on hard writing, that is really irresponsible. It's the Chinese New Year, so I plan to write an ending that doesn't involve eunuchs and give readers an explanation, and then I can finish it and take a break for the Chinese New Year. Then I will start a new book after the new year. Thank you all for your continued company!

It's interesting but not good-looking. The writing style is good enough, but the shortcoming is that it doesn't have a climax. It wanes as soon as I get excited about it, and it becomes suffocating after I lose my enthusiasm again! !

I have always felt that it is impossible not to be greedy for fame and wealth. At least good living conditions must be guaranteed. Otherwise, it would be too unfair. I have paid a lot but enjoyed nothing. Besides, it is impossible for people with power to return to the ordinary days of the past. Even soldiers on the battlefield will have side effects, let alone extraordinary ones.

A Chinese organization started with four foreigners. Anyway, I don't like it. I can accept that there are foreigners, but I can't accept that most of them are foreigners.

It doesn't look good from the back, it's boring

This setting looks like the natives are fierce.

There are many poisonous points. The biggest poisonous point is that the people are accepted too casually. One will be accepted after three or two sentences, and one will be accepted after three or two sentences. Since it is a mysterious organization, it must be worthy of the word "mysterious". I feel that after reading more than ten chapters, the protagonist obviously does not have a very high IQ, but it is okay. The Tao should not be preached lightly, and how many people can do this kind of dedication? I didn't understand the nature of mind and other aspects, so I just accepted it. It was too fast-paced, extraordinary things were too easy to obtain, and it was a bit too casual. I hope the pace can be slower and stricter in the future.

Nowadays, behind-the-scenes novels are rare, and compared with many current behind-the-scenes eunuchs that have been written or failed to be written, this book is even more rare. The pace is neither too fast nor too slow, and it is step-by-step. It is quite attractive to people who like to read behind-the-scenes stories. I hope there will be more novels about behind-the-scenes stories. 👍👍👍