Douluo: Free Sss-level Martial Arts for the First Deposit

My brothers are getting married on May 2nd. Please take a day off and wait until I come back to make up for the manuscript! ! !

I have only read a few chapters, and I really can't stand it with my brain. Dai Mubai should have been in Soto City at that time, but at the beginning Dai Mubai appeared directly in Tiandou City. Together with Tang San, Tiandou City is at least two or three days away from Soto City. Whether Dai Mubai has heard of the twins or not, even if he has heard of them , it is impossible for him to go from Soto City to Tiandou City for them. Flanders also said that he would find the protagonist and defeat him. When hunting the soul beasts later, Oscar Meng still did not show up. After Oscar absorbed the soul ring, Er Ming did not show up either. What's even more ridiculous is that Xiao Wu's true identity was not discovered by Titled Douluo! She also said that Da Ming and Er Ming helped her block it. Ha, how did they know? Did Xiao Wu tell them in advance? Now anyone can write fanfics

This book has received mixed reviews. But I think this book is well written. First of all, the author depicts the human heart in detail, especially when describing the Calabash Boy to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song was right to kill Qiao Feng? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, how could Yang Guo's hand be cut off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang would not have thought about crossing the cliff and Linghu Chong to occupy the mountain as king. I think the role of Song Jiang was handled very well. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before who always chatted with Lin Daiyu and did not do his job properly. Including the scene where Xiahou Dun fights Xu Sanduo was also shot very well. It completely subverts Xu Sanduo's sinister image in our minds. And Xiahou Dun did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as stated in the original work. It was the sparks that only sparked with Mei Changsu after she experienced her transference. In this way, the logic of the plot becomes very smooth. Give the audience a refreshing feeling. The plot of the story is also intricate and fascinating. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies have a revenge plan against He-Man? Who is responsible for the big belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions tightly locked the audience's attention. The finale of the fight scene between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck was well arranged, and the open ending made the audience yearn for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. It is worth mentioning that the atmosphere of vicissitudes of life when Big Big Wolf misses Zhou Zhiruo in Akina Mountain, and Ren Wo Xing's delicate inner world when he steals Huba, the sacred object of the Uchiha clan, is shown at once. The stand-up comedy session between Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang, who guest-starred in the film, and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage and asking Charlotte to go with him to save his grandfather are also highlights.

Emperor Xue Ye was just a titled Douluo, and he couldn't be manipulated at will. It's so fake that a wealthy businessman can have a bodyguard named Douluo.

It's obviously a fantasy trench battle power, so I have to use the peak fantasy battle power. The peak fantasy battle power, whether it's skills or physique, is almost invincible at the beginning in Douluo World.

The writing in other places is good, let alone the drama. What the hell do you need so many martial souls for? Two of them are really strong. The more you write, the more outrageous it becomes.

After reading a few chapters, I really can't read it with my brain. The protagonist's family recruits a Douluo from outside, and then he runs around and causes trouble. Are you afraid that others will not know that there is something wrong with your soul ring? Are you treating others as fools? At first, you even had a skill to hide your aura, but if you go around showing off your holiness in front of others and open an extraordinary soul ring to show others every day, everyone knows there is something wrong.

The perfect world is too weak. Just like the real dragon, at least it is a real immortal. You, the God King of Douluo, God Realm, can't even compare to a fingernail.

How did this kind of garbage get on the recommendation list? It's a book made up by all kinds of bullshit, it makes me laugh to death, and it's written randomly.

The whole page is about introducing the rewards of the recharge system, and I keep repeating it, can't I omit some of it?