Douluo: Reincarnated Huo Yuhao, Surrounded by Time Travelers

I think it was well written. Without Tianmeng Iceworm, Huo Yuhao is trying to survive among the time travellers, and he has not changed his gender. I feel like the plot is pretty good, but I just don't have a good sense of security. To put it bluntly, the game is too low-key. I hope the author can give Huo Yuhao a better plug-in later, at least one that is bigger than the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm's plug-in. Otherwise it would be meaningless. After reading more than a dozen chapters, my first feeling was that I had no sense of security and felt aggrieved. The million-year soul ring that clearly belonged to Huo Yuhao was gone, and I was forced to use a pseudonym by the time traveler. Very frustrating! ! ! I hope the author can read this comment and give Huo Yuhao a bigger thumbs up later, otherwise I really can't stand it.

I posted it at Qidian before, and now I'm adding it here too.

I originally wanted to write about the oppression of civilians by the nobles of Douluo Continent, but recently I saw those real slices, and with the recent revelations about Epstein, I found that the things I racked my brains to imagine were not as magical as reality. I felt... A little heartbroken. In the end, the extremely evil nobles I imagined went to Millikin and stopped like a Buddha, and I suddenly got stuck. I'm very sorry, meow~ε(┬┬┬┬)3 I will resume normal updates as soon as the outline is modified.

It's a pity. The outline must have been messed up by the editor. The academy chapter was skipped abruptly, and the fun was gone.

It's nice to read, but I feel like it has the flavor of a light novel later on. Also, does the heroine feel like there's too much?

Don't be afraid of collapse, everyone, there is an outline. By the way, there is no one who seizes the body among the time travellers. Don't worry and watch.

Except for the occasional poor writing (which is already very good, I am the kind of person who has some plots or scenes in my mind, but no writing skills to write them out), from all angles, whether it is the novelty of the plot or the dense plot, it is very good. The key is that it doesn't give me an awkward feeling. Many fan fiction nowadays feels quite awkward.

It's a bit interesting. The author might as well add some plug-ins, such as being favored by Shi Yi and giving him a double eye inheritance or something😘

I can't. I'm laughing so hard that my stomach hurts. It's too hard to eat.

The protagonist's cheating is too small. The author makes it bigger.