Douluo: Good and Evil Dancing Lin, Supreme Dragon God

At present, the number of words in this book is not that many, so let's just take the first 100,000 words. (Rating: 1-5 points) First of all, in terms of writing, it can actually be regarded as a 4 points, which is considered excellent. Unlike most Douluo fans, the language is too ordinary and there are too many grammatical errors. Secondly, the plot can get 4 points, which is very novel. There are many Douluo fans who start with the talisman. However, this book starts with the tiger talisman, which is unique. However, the plot still follows the original text and lacks expansion of the plot. One point is deducted. However, it is still recommended that the author's writing skills are sufficient before expanding the plot. Otherwise, the plot will collapse and the gain will not be worth the loss. Finally, I give 5 points for the characters. Readers with more than 5 years of reading experience will not refute this (except Gang Jing). The Tiger Talisman divides good and evil, and divides the protagonist into two children in terms of personality, one black and one white. They have distinct and distinctive personalities, and the personality changes are also obvious. In Douluo, a world dominated by evil nature, evil gradually turns into chaotic evil, and good gradually turns into chaotic good. This can be clearly seen in the first 100,000 words. In conclusion, as long as this book continues to be written and the outline is not changed too much, it can occupy a place among Douluo fans. Remind! ! ! Although my personal opinion is not the public opinion, it is! Don't just listen to the opinions of people with problematic views! ! !

Where does Tang Wulin's evil side come from? He has been happy since he was a child. If you write about Huo Yuhao, I can accept it. And I don't see how kind Bai Lin is.

Double male protagonists: Bai Lin (& Gu Yue)/Hei Lin (no CP) The setting conflicts with Ultimate Douluo, but everyone knows about Ultimate Douluo, so just pretend he doesn't exist... [Emot=default,22/] It made up for a lot of regrets and reminded me of that empty feeling in my heart again. But this time I was finally able to let it go openly. [Emot=default,06/] Really like the two protagonists. In the early stage, I liked Bai Lin's gentleness and sense of security best, and in the later stage, I preferred Hei Lin's courage and independence. The two protagonists represent good and evil on the surface, but in fact they have grown up separately and gradually formed two different characters with distinct personalities. With Hei Lin's company, Bai Lin went from being cowardly at first to gradually becoming independent and strong. Hei Lin also gradually learned to grasp the rules and handle basic interpersonal relationships while getting along with Bai Lin (specifically Bai Lin, Tang Ziran, Lang Yue). The two protagonists have their own bottom line, and this also prevents them from becoming madonnas or madmen. It makes the characters more distinct and three-dimensional, which I like very much. [Emot=default,80/]

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It looks good, but I have to criticize its shortcomings. The combat power is too exaggerated. You have only unlocked four seals. How can you defeat a titled Douluo? And even though they are said to be Dragon Martial Spirits, they are not as powerful as you. Is the combined combat power of the two of you so exaggerated? Also, he only broke two seals when he was 10 years old and yet he is already so strong. Do you think it's possible? How could he possibly complete the two-word battle armor at the age of 13? One-word battle armor requires level 50 soul power, but you are only level 49. Don't tell me about soul power and qi and blood. It's useless. The compatibility must reach over 60%, so it must be five rings. There is no realm at all in qi and blood. Also, when describing the relationship with Gu Yue, don't go over it in one stroke, the writing can be more delicate. This seems very sloppy, and Mu Chen is only a Contra and not a Titled Douluo. When Tang Wulin was in the Seventh Ring in the original work, he was a Contra and was just about to become a Titled Douluo.

Urgent update. If the author wants to write more (words) and details (numbers), it will be no problem. Slow-burning novels will test your skills.

We can see Dou San and his colleagues again, great

When will Heilin appear?

Very good Dou San fan fiction, the author will update it quickly

Come on, author, this book is very good and don't stop updating it.