Douluo: Dragon King: I Am Planting a Sacred Tree in Douluo

By the way, super shadow level should be able to reach god level strength, right? The Jade Blood Trap of the Six Paths, which is instantaneous if touched, has the ability to create and destroy, so it's not a big problem to hang the God King, right? I've given you the monthly pass, please update soon.

Damn author, my great VIP can't read it. You have a way to die🤔🤔🤔

I found several problems 1: I haven't seen much growth in the protagonist's cultivation after reading Chapter 43. 2: The plot of Shui is too serious, especially the plot of Mu Xi. I believe that most readers are not very willing to read it. Although I know it is to get closer to her father, I don't think these plots are particularly important, and the plot in particular is very annoying to watch. 3: I feel that the character of the protagonist can be modified a little bit. I think this kind of character is really difficult to introduce. And from the author's character of the protagonist, I can roughly guess that the author is a novice. This can be felt by reading the novel directly. 4: Since you want to write a Dou San fanfic, you have set the protagonist to have only seen Dou Yi and part of Dou II. It feels completely wrong. If this is the case, it is better to write a Dou San fanfic directly. None of the Dou San fanfics I have read are like you who just time-traveled without having read the plot. At least they have seen part of the Dou San plot. If you don't change the above points, it will be difficult to become popular because the writing is indeed too lame.

There is no point in writing about time travel like this. He looks like the mastermind behind the scenes and has no intelligence at all. He doesn't have any trump cards to deal with Tang San. Tang San has a lot of trump cards but he didn't kill him. No matter how stupid Tang San is, he can't be this bad.

Why do you need a second-hand ice emperor? Is there any difference between them and Xiao Wu? Aren't they both traitors? They are not as good as Xiao Wu. Xiao Wu is still in love. Aren't they just pure twitches? One of them was raped and still fell in love with the initiator. It's so depressing. It's better to have a 100,000-year swan with Brigitte than the two of them.

Isn't the author contradictory? You said in the comment area that you don't know the plot of Dou San regarding the setting. What does this fourth one say? [Are you kidding! It was so hard to cross out my name from Tang Hao's notebook!] I don't know the plot of Dou San, but I don't know that Tang Hao took action.

To be honest, there is no difference between acquiring a second-hand Ice Emperor in Douluo and [Zilu]. It would be better to accept Bibi Dong than to accept this thing! Although both of them were raped, Bibi Dong killed Qian Xunji. You are looking at Ice Emperor, how disgusting, falling in love with his own person. Chapter 179, Ice Emperor self-destructsqj

Douluo's rubbish combat power is only one level at most and even worse than this Dou Po. The Dragon God is just a hybrid who has not even reached the Cave Heaven Realm. At most, he is at the peak of moving blood. Adam's Western destiny, Eastern cultivation/Heavenly cultivation/Underground reincarnation/Humanistic martial arts cultivation, I am laughing so hard. Martial souls are pure-blooded humans. Others are born from soul beasts and raped humans. They are limited to the Douluo star and do not include other planets in the Douluo universe (the Douluo trilogy includes other worlds such as Shen Yin and Qin Emperor). Those who are considered pure humans/Douluo stars are semi-human. Their bodies are malnourished. After all, the direct ratio is the orthodox martial spirit of human beings, not the martial spirit that is reproduced by soul beasts. The more the body of the martial soul, the more human blood you have. If the fewer the body of the martial soul, it proves that the more blood of the soul beasts your descendants will give birth to, it means that the ancestors were born with the soul beasts. The more demon clan people there are, the more body parts and less cultivation the better. It's funny. If you want to use more body parts, you can eliminate the soul beast bloodline and soul ring foreign objects, which is worse for the body. Look at which world of cultivators does not refine the bloodline and use it for oneself instead of strengthening the soul beast bloodline? There is no need to use the soul ring with the original martial soul. The original martial soul is originally human. Especially this strange soul ring taints the original martial soul. It takes 10,000 years to become conscious. Especially the rogue rabbit. I don't know how long it took for the body to be tainted. What does the realization system need? If these soul rings are donated, they are at least clean.

Does the protagonist know the plot? He says he doesn't know the plot, but he knows Tang Hao and Tang San. He says he knows the plot, but he acts like he doesn't know the plot.

It doesn't look good, the front is okay, but where is the back? Why did the protagonist do this, why did the protagonist resurrect Di Qiu'er, etc., Just tell me to quit. And you have researched all 10 tails of your protagonist. I really don't know whether the protagonist's performance is good or not. There are still a lot of problems. I don't know where to start. I can't understand it after typing. Anyway, I'm trying to persuade you to quit.