Douluo: Dragon King: I Am Planting a Sacred Tree in Douluo

By the way, super shadow level should be able to reach god level strength, right? The Jade Blood Trap of the Six Paths, which is instantaneous if touched, has the ability to create and destroy, so it's not a big problem to hang the God King, right? I've given you the monthly pass, please update soon.

Damn author, my great VIP can't read it. You have a way to die🤔🤔🤔

I found several problems 1: I haven't seen much growth in the protagonist's cultivation after reading Chapter 43. 2: The plot of Shui is too serious, especially the plot of Mu Xi. I believe that most readers are not very willing to read it. Although I know it is to get closer to her father, I don't think these plots are particularly important, and the plot in particular is very annoying to watch. 3: I feel that the character of the protagonist can be modified a little bit. I think this kind of character is really difficult to introduce. And from the author's character of the protagonist, I can roughly guess that the author is a novice. This can be felt by reading the novel directly. 4: Since you want to write a Dou San fanfic, you have set the protagonist to have only seen Dou Yi and part of Dou II. It feels completely wrong. If this is the case, it is better to write a Dou San fanfic directly. None of the Dou San fanfics I have read are like you who just time-traveled without having read the plot. At least they have seen part of the Dou San plot. If you don't change the above points, it will be difficult to become popular because the writing is indeed too lame.

There is no point in writing about time travel like this. He looks like the mastermind behind the scenes and has no intelligence at all. He doesn't have any trump cards to deal with Tang San. Tang San has a lot of trump cards but he didn't kill him. No matter how stupid Tang San is, he can't be this bad.

To be honest, there is no difference between acquiring a second-hand Ice Emperor in Douluo and [Zilu]. It would be better to accept Bibi Dong than to accept this thing! Although both of them were raped, Bibi Dong killed Qian Xunji. You are looking at Ice Emperor, how disgusting, falling in love with his own person. Chapter 179, Ice Emperor self-destructsqj

Isn't the author contradictory? You said in the comment area that you don't know the plot of Dou San regarding the setting. What does this fourth one say? [Are you kidding! It was so hard to cross out my name from Tang Hao's notebook!] I don't know the plot of Dou San, but I don't know that Tang Hao took action.

Why do you need a second-hand ice emperor? Is there any difference between them and Xiao Wu? Aren't they both traitors? They are not as good as Xiao Wu. Xiao Wu is still in love. Aren't they just pure twitches? One of them was raped and still fell in love with the initiator. It's so depressing. It's better to have a 100,000-year swan with Brigitte than the two of them.

Does the protagonist know the plot? He says he doesn't know the plot, but he knows Tang Hao and Tang San. He says he knows the plot, but he acts like he doesn't know the plot.

Reading this book is like being deceived by Akaashi. He is obviously greedy for someone else's body but wants to talk about favors and benefits. It is obvious that the turtle male protagonist insists on acting like a strategist. The original plot is like shit and he is still enjoying himself until it takes off. In the author's eyes, he has perfect skills in killing hundred-level bosses with a knife, but in fact his nose has become red and round.

It doesn't look good, the front is okay, but where is the back? Why did the protagonist do this, why did the protagonist resurrect Di Qiu'er, etc., Just tell me to quit. And you have researched all 10 tails of your protagonist. I really don't know whether the protagonist's performance is good or not. There are still a lot of problems. I don't know where to start. I can't understand it after typing. Anyway, I'm trying to persuade you to quit.