
Planeswalker: My Plane War
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This is the story of a planeswalker... Friends who like it can join the group 101516518
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Official(27)Scraped 4d ago
If you dare to write, you won't be allowed to speak. Deleting comments is a 6
You wrote the entire first chapter about sudden death, with no extension or plot. How dare you call it a wedge? I made a comment and asked the author why he wrote it like this, but the comment was deleted. What can be deleted? You wrote a chapter about sudden death with only a few words, and you didn't let me tell you what happened. The readers came here to read Planeswalker and to see you popularize the knowledge of sudden death. Just a few words will suffice. If you really write a few hundred words about sudden death, my comments will be considered pointless and hypocritical. You've almost written a thousand words for Sudden Death. Just tell me what's wrong. Don't write like that if you're afraid of being criticized. Now the novels are getting more and more bad and it's still hard to explain.
Long-winded
Too wordy,
water
I have been reading the novel for more than ten years, and for the first time I felt that I couldn't bear it. Is your home the sea? There is so much water.
I'm also tired, am I too good at water? I wish I could describe every blade of grass, forget about the environment, can there be less psychological description? You can write 4 or 5 chapters about any matter, that's enough
I'll be satisfied if I have enough food.
You are good at water
What's so long-winded about above is that if you can get water, you can just go and raise fish.
A labor of love
People who read books from ancient gods use their love to generate electricity. All the books are free. If you don't like it, you can leave. Attacking the free author is simply crazy.
The front part is too rough
You are a master of gaming, and your gaming intuition is there. When you enter the game, you follow the novice tutorial, and you are still struggling. You look like a great god.
Even though I know there is something I can't say, I still talk about it like a fool, desperately asking why I traveled through time and how can I not travel through time? I feel embarrassed when I look at it. This is written in the 21st century. I already know what time travel is about, but I still act like a fool and say it there.
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Official(27)Scraped 4d ago
If you dare to write, you won't be allowed to speak. Deleting comments is a 6
You wrote the entire first chapter about sudden death, with no extension or plot. How dare you call it a wedge? I made a comment and asked the author why he wrote it like this, but the comment was deleted. What can be deleted? You wrote a chapter about sudden death with only a few words, and you didn't let me tell you what happened. The readers came here to read Planeswalker and to see you popularize the knowledge of sudden death. Just a few words will suffice. If you really write a few hundred words about sudden death, my comments will be considered pointless and hypocritical. You've almost written a thousand words for Sudden Death. Just tell me what's wrong. Don't write like that if you're afraid of being criticized. Now the novels are getting more and more bad and it's still hard to explain.
Long-winded
Too wordy,
water
I have been reading the novel for more than ten years, and for the first time I felt that I couldn't bear it. Is your home the sea? There is so much water.
I'm also tired, am I too good at water? I wish I could describe every blade of grass, forget about the environment, can there be less psychological description? You can write 4 or 5 chapters about any matter, that's enough
I'll be satisfied if I have enough food.
You are good at water
What's so long-winded about above is that if you can get water, you can just go and raise fish.
A labor of love
People who read books from ancient gods use their love to generate electricity. All the books are free. If you don't like it, you can leave. Attacking the free author is simply crazy.
The front part is too rough
You are a master of gaming, and your gaming intuition is there. When you enter the game, you follow the novice tutorial, and you are still struggling. You look like a great god.
Even though I know there is something I can't say, I still talk about it like a fool, desperately asking why I traveled through time and how can I not travel through time? I feel embarrassed when I look at it. This is written in the 21st century. I already know what time travel is about, but I still act like a fool and say it there.
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What is new is that in the Western Zhou Dynasty, a parallel world with magical gods, the dogs, ghosts, and various barbarians were races different from humans. Bloody sacrifices and ignorant spirits, gods and humans are not far away, the sons of gods are active in the world, and the blood of gods is also spread in the world. The innate and natural spirits show their efficaciousness and analyze the priesthood and seek the divine position. Human heroes are worshiped by people because of their great achievements and become spirits to seek the divine position. This kind of wild magic mixed with ancient tribal style is very touching. This book can be said to be very slow to gain popularity. Time travel is a meme. Anyone who knows about it will time travel passively. The double door can only travel through the soul, and cannot exchange things or obtain benefits. When the soul-piercing person dies, the reality will die together. It can be said to be very cheating. The protagonist inherited the planeswalker system that had land cards before it started to take off. Why is it said to be slow to gain steam? It took more than 100 chapters to gain the power of the planeswalker.




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