
Alien Paradise
by Two Eyes
About This Novel
Chaoyang lived an ordinary life for more than twenty years, but his life was disrupted by a sudden "awakening" - he awakened and became the legendary demon who lived by the power of wishes. The bad news is that the power of will is hard to find in this world. The good news is that before he was about to starve to death, he opened a passage to another world and had abundant wishes. The bad news is that most wishes are granted. The good news is, no one knows how to make wishes better than him. Chaoyang initially responded to prayers just to survive, but as he grew bigger and stronger, he turned this into an industry. And the place where many wishes can come true is [Paradise].
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Official(27)Scraped 20d ago
Cut in half, not worth watching
As the title suggests, this novel ends abruptly after hastily creating a final boss for the protagonist to defeat. Although some readers had expected the end of this chapter before, they still feel that the ending is too abrupt, like a suspended prisoner who choked to death on the water he drank while waiting for execution. It can be said that the end of this book is a disappointment to its worldview. The many conflicts between the forces created in the book, not to mention the easy ones, other conflicts such as the conflict between angels and demons, other parts of the God of Cause and Effect, etc., Were all abandoned in this ending, especially the angels and demons. I don't know how many readers think like me that this is the main conflict in the author's original story. As great as my expectations were, how angry I felt when I saw the ending. This is a story that does not meet readers' expectations and is not worth reading.
This shouldn't be called a devil. It should be more convincing to write about the journey of the savior.
This is the most savior-like devil I have ever seen. He goes around doing good things like a holy mother. The most important thing is that he does not have any force.
Uh-huh
It is recommended not to open comments, otherwise three predictions will pop up. I am really speechless. Some readers are really...
Stop writing, stop writing, this subject is not good at all, please continue to stir up nonsense, hurry up and write another novel about medieval knights and magic. There are demons, dragons and the like in it. The magic can barely be explained by science, but don't write nonsense. Like Wings of Wind, Wings of Fire can still be understood, what the hell are Wings of Water, can you fly with wings made of water behind you?
Please take care of yourself and reduce involution
The author got seriously ill while writing the book, which coincided with the death of a close friend in the author's circle. Indeed, his mentality and life have changed a lot. He hopes to adjust his body, work and rest regularly, reduce the amount of code words, slowly brew code words, and strive to write another masterpiece before the age of forty. Come on👏
The subject matter is good, but the behavior of the protagonist feels a bit strange
Well, I read Chapter 39 and couldn't stand it anymore at Chapter 40 At the end of the second plot of Chapter 39, an angel girl ran over to kill the protagonist. In the end, when she almost killed the protagonist, the battery ran out and the computer crashed. Then he would be dead if the protagonist didn't save him. The protagonist checked his memory and felt that he was a good person. In Chapter 40, the protagonist saved the angel, but I didn't read the rest of it. The front is pretty good, there are still poisonous spots, but it's not severe pain. By Chapter 40, the angel directly passed through the two-world passage created by the protagonist, and then killed him in front of the protagonist. This is a big poisonous point. Level 6 boss is certified here
Finally waiting for you! ! !
Two eyes! You finally changed it! ! ! Excited heart, trembling hands, eyes renewed!
I said I haven't read Eryanzizi's book recently. Hope to recover soon and resume updates
This, the setting is messy, it can be seen that the outline has been changed many times in a row, until it has changed beyond recognition.
Here I go, new book! Although I haven't read it yet, I'd like to give you a five-star review Ermu. Do you know how I spent this year? I have to go back and see the witch every day.
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Official(27)Scraped 20d ago
Cut in half, not worth watching
As the title suggests, this novel ends abruptly after hastily creating a final boss for the protagonist to defeat. Although some readers had expected the end of this chapter before, they still feel that the ending is too abrupt, like a suspended prisoner who choked to death on the water he drank while waiting for execution. It can be said that the end of this book is a disappointment to its worldview. The many conflicts between the forces created in the book, not to mention the easy ones, other conflicts such as the conflict between angels and demons, other parts of the God of Cause and Effect, etc., Were all abandoned in this ending, especially the angels and demons. I don't know how many readers think like me that this is the main conflict in the author's original story. As great as my expectations were, how angry I felt when I saw the ending. This is a story that does not meet readers' expectations and is not worth reading.
This shouldn't be called a devil. It should be more convincing to write about the journey of the savior.
This is the most savior-like devil I have ever seen. He goes around doing good things like a holy mother. The most important thing is that he does not have any force.
Uh-huh
It is recommended not to open comments, otherwise three predictions will pop up. I am really speechless. Some readers are really...
Stop writing, stop writing, this subject is not good at all, please continue to stir up nonsense, hurry up and write another novel about medieval knights and magic. There are demons, dragons and the like in it. The magic can barely be explained by science, but don't write nonsense. Like Wings of Wind, Wings of Fire can still be understood, what the hell are Wings of Water, can you fly with wings made of water behind you?
Please take care of yourself and reduce involution
The author got seriously ill while writing the book, which coincided with the death of a close friend in the author's circle. Indeed, his mentality and life have changed a lot. He hopes to adjust his body, work and rest regularly, reduce the amount of code words, slowly brew code words, and strive to write another masterpiece before the age of forty. Come on👏
The subject matter is good, but the behavior of the protagonist feels a bit strange
Well, I read Chapter 39 and couldn't stand it anymore at Chapter 40 At the end of the second plot of Chapter 39, an angel girl ran over to kill the protagonist. In the end, when she almost killed the protagonist, the battery ran out and the computer crashed. Then he would be dead if the protagonist didn't save him. The protagonist checked his memory and felt that he was a good person. In Chapter 40, the protagonist saved the angel, but I didn't read the rest of it. The front is pretty good, there are still poisonous spots, but it's not severe pain. By Chapter 40, the angel directly passed through the two-world passage created by the protagonist, and then killed him in front of the protagonist. This is a big poisonous point. Level 6 boss is certified here
Finally waiting for you! ! !
Two eyes! You finally changed it! ! ! Excited heart, trembling hands, eyes renewed!
I said I haven't read Eryanzizi's book recently. Hope to recover soon and resume updates
This, the setting is messy, it can be seen that the outline has been changed many times in a row, until it has changed beyond recognition.
Here I go, new book! Although I haven't read it yet, I'd like to give you a five-star review Ermu. Do you know how I spent this year? I have to go back and see the witch every day.
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Ermu new book. Is it the mastermind behind this or the fourth natural disaster? The protagonist becomes a demon, but there is no desire to survive in this time and space, so he goes to another world to make money. Currently, the shell of a virtual reality online game is used to take a group of players to another world to help others fulfill their wishes and gain wish power. Why read this book: After Ermu finished writing The Witch, I personally felt that the quality of the previous book was not ideal, but the current one is pretty good. Although it is based on the outdated Fourth Natural Disaster formula, it still looks interesting. It is obvious that the protagonist's ability and character as the mastermind behind the scenes have been weakened, and various overturns have led to speculation and suspicion by players. There is reason to suspect that this is a group portrait novel in which the protagonist becomes a half-tool man, and it will not develop into a plane travel flow, right? Anyway, it looks pretty interesting at this stage. Why not read this book: If you were to step into the perspective of the protagonist, you would definitely be unhappy. In general, I'll give it a try. I'll make a comment later depending on the situation.




The second edition of the new book has been updated. It seems that the author's condition has improved. I hope to recover soon.




The second edition of the new book has been updated. It seems that the author's condition has improved. I hope to recover soon and continue writing books.




Feeling pretty good so far.












