Data Daojun

I'm not going to complain, this book has good ideas and creativity, but how to create such a vicious plot? The digitization of used things can be shared and used by others. I'm confused. Before this plot, add an explanation to explain that although it will be shared and used by others, it is purely working for the protagonist. Is it difficult for the protagonist to take the majority? Having this kind of plot without explanation will make some readers feel uncomfortable, and if this kind of plot is not patched, it is purely poisonous and there is no other way to say it. Why? Because if this shared use thing reaches the hands of ambitious or cautious people, it will be easy for the protagonist to open an account. Do you understand? If nothing else, the one named Ji who was the first to get this thing, didn't he understand that this kind of thing was obviously abnormal? If he directly asked the clerk where this thing came from, wouldn't the protagonist explode? Others don't know whether the protagonist got it accidentally like him, but does that prevent others from paying attention to the protagonist, investigating the protagonist, or even controlling the protagonist? To put it bluntly, even if the author didn't write this kind of plot, some readers won't be able to accept it because it doesn't make sense logically. And the most important thing is that the author wrote this plot at the beginning, which means that the readers do not know the value of force in this world. If there are souls in this world that can be searched, then the protagonist is not broken. This kind of obvious flaw in details can be completely avoided. Just say a few more words. Don't think that when reading novels, people always comment that the explanations are too wordy is a big problem. In fact, as long as the explanations are not watery or overexplained, this kind of normal patch can actually give readers a better reading experience.

Poison points: The protagonist is a domestic slave lover and likes to be a cow and horse. The protagonist likes to be controlled by others and is a douchebag. Because he can escape from bondage, but he continues to be a slave because of greed. Comparable to the husband-in-law, the husband-in-law and the domestic slave are both the protagonists

Yes, dataization is actually a relatively common cheat, but the author's crooked idea turned data into a shareable sub-terminal. It is different from the Tarot Society of the Lord of Mysteries, but it also draws on the ideas therein and becomes an alternative form of freedom. With Goldfinger's God-given reward for hard work, and the ability to draw on the peerless wisdom of outside geniuses, the protagonist who combines all these is of course invincible. However, the scene with three heads and six arms born due to lag is shown in the introduction at the beginning, and is not mentioned later. I hope it will be shown later.

The author is a little bit arrogant, but it doesn't spread on a large scale and increase the number of people online?

New guy or new vest? The overall feeling is pretty good. The world view setting and plot development are quite interesting. I hope that I can continue to take advantage of the built-in bugs in the future.

It's been a long time since I updated. Are you really in the palace?

The author is disappointed, it has not been updated for so long.

The creativity is good, there are some small flaws but they are not hidden. I still like the behind-the-scenes flow.

It's quite interesting, but the content is too dense to read.

Boring, nothing exciting, just telling a story