I May Not Survive Three Chapters

I saw someone who was very good at level 6 with 900 hours. Is it because I relied on ads to maintain my 1,000 hours without recharging money?

Give it two stars and give me a recommendation. After all, creating is not easy. (The plot after Chapter 60 is basically the same as other routines, but the angle is changed.)

Advantages: The style of this book is very good, and the subject matter is very novel and has great potential. Disadvantages: First of all, the protagonist you wrote seems to be quite timid and fearful. Chu Fan is a time traveler, but so is the protagonist. Is it just because he has better luck than the protagonist? It is obvious that the conflict between Chu Fan and Chu Du is irreconcilable, so why do you still let him whitewash it blindly? Willn't it become darker as the story goes? Since two people cannot live in peace. Then the protagonist will not kill him first before he is fully developed. This will save him from causing trouble for the protagonist in the future. Secondly, I felt like I didn't have a clear idea of ​​what the protagonist wanted to do. Thirdly, since the protagonist is a swordsman, I never felt like a swordsman from him. According to my understanding of what sword cultivators are, they are a group of lunatics who are desperate for their lives, a group of lunatics who will not be afraid even if the sky falls. You are a group of lunatics who will split the sky apart even if it wants to destroy you. They are a group of people who do not admit defeat and are not afraid of death. Another point is that I have written more than 200 chapters, but the protagonist is still living in a shabby place. Isn't a state so big? It also feels that the protagonist's strengths are not fully utilized. His greatest strength is that he is handsome. You can make Chudu become a star or a singer. A little complaint (I feel like the author's writing is very watery, and it's not good to blindly let the protagonist whitewash)

It was rumored that Yu Ji wrote beautifully, so Xiang Yu, the overlord, asked Yu Ji to teach her how to write. Yu Ji closed her eyes and held Xiang Yu's hand to write, so later on, the writing method of "Blind Ji Ba's writing" was passed down from generation to generation...

The protagonist is still a mortal with no power to restrain a chicken, so I will obey you in Wheel of Water.

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To be honest, the subject matter of this book is really good and very novel. I felt really comfortable reading it in the early stage. The characters each have their own characteristics. But since the Taibai Sword Immortal pitted Chudu, I have felt more and more uncomfortable. You are clearly abusing the protagonist, or you are abusing the protagonist in a fancy way. The protagonist does something wrong. You have to make a twist in the originally good plot. Indeed, this can indeed interest the readers, but too many such routines will make people bored, and it is easy to make people feel uncomfortable. Are you trying to abuse the main character? I originally read it, but then you said you didn't know how to write, so I stopped reading. But after seeing nearly 400 pictures, I really couldn't stand it anymore. According to your setting, does he have to kill his brother to be a ghost? Or do you plan to keep writing about them cheating each other, fill "three chapters", and then arrange an inexplicable ending, and then finish the story with flowers? I hope the author can see and arrange some things to make Chu Du go smoothly to the end. A few things are enough, and more will not meet the purpose of your book. (The above is just my personal opinion. After all, I have only read nearly 400 chapters. If there is a plot like what I mentioned later, just pretend I didn't say it.) I hope the author can continue writing it. I really like this book.

This is the only book I have read with more than 600 pictures in which the protagonist is still in the first realm.

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