Family Training: All Members Are Villains

I have read more than 60 chapters and would like to make a few suggestions. First: The character of the protagonist needs to be changed. The head of the family of the five brothers is the leader, instead of having to use his own brain to make plans for everything. The protagonist only needs to make decisions and look at the overall situation. The fifth child can serve as a counselor by reading the sages' books. The fourth child has a character flaw and a dark side. On the one hand, he also protects the family, and can be used for assassinations, interrogations, kidnappings, etc. It is most suitable for him to work against the head of the family. The third child can serve in the intelligence department, Fireworks Alley Liu is most suitable for collecting intelligence, and the warrior (reckless) second child can be a pioneer. After all, the second elder really obeys the boss's words. In fact, the author has differentiated the characters of the five brothers, but he has not written out the values ​​of each of them, nor has he written an outline of the system. Everyone has the IQ, but they can't always feel the protagonist's resourcefulness. If you don't write about the family, but you write about the individual, then the protagonist's wisdom will be cleared up at once, and the author can change it. Second: The county magistrate, the three major families, and Cheng Yue Sizheng, who came here, wrote too far-fetched IQs. After reading it, I just felt that these people have no brains. People who have lived for such a long time will definitely make plans and then act. They have no cards and are unrealistic. Let alone Cheng Yue. He has information and strength. Ding Dian (Dian) (You can carefully appreciate the ruthlessness of the word "prison") You are a person that everyone likes, even if they don't look down on you, they will not give you a chance to jump around in major matters at hand. I don't think it is as simple as a normal person just warning you when they hear that you are going to do something that will put my status in jeopardy. Third: The author's plot is quite good and vivid, but... . . The good high-intelligence strategy plot duels and calculations were not reflected, which I think is quite a pity, really. I hope the author will change something later

It's really useless, I feel frustrated, and I feel full after reading a novel. Quit the trap

Originally, I just wanted to feel good when I read a book. You kept abusing the protagonist, and you kept abusing the protagonist. I was really convinced. Reading a novel is still so uncomfortable. Why am I reading a novel? I can understand it if you torture it a little, suppress your desires first, but you continue to torture me. You have read more than fifty chapters, and it has made me uncomfortable. . .

The outline routine is laid out from the beginning. Enemies, holy religions decline, and their strength grows stronger, all in the same way. Unlike in the future, a saint with unparalleled resourcefulness will have to rely on a small family. Based on the current intelligence of the saint, it can be seen that she can create many families. To be honest, the author has developed slowly. In the past two years, the improvement was very slow. Later, no matter how fast he was, he couldn't catch up with the Saint. If he could catch up, wouldn't it mean that Goldfinger is powerful? Or it would suddenly depress people's intelligence or limit the improvement of their strength. No matter how you say it, it's a little tasteless, and the strength of the family will definitely be different, otherwise it means replicability, which means that if you have the resources, you can also copy a similar family. The author's current cheats mainly target individuals, and without distinction, they will be unsatisfactory. Of course, I would like to give you a suggestion: don't have a female protagonist, and don't engage in any ambiguity. The rating of this book will really be worse if you mess with the female protagonist. However, the book is still too short after all. This is all my personal opinion. If I am wrong, I will wait until the author is longer and I will reply. I will read it later, at least when I can write a big chapter and kill the enemy with my own hands, then call me. Also, the plot is really too cliche. Since the author has laid out the main plot, he should try to add more branch plots. At present, it feels like a fog. I haven't read it at all, but the impression is not profound, because it is all a poorly used plot. Please add some features to polish the article.

When it comes to family stories, don't write things that are too sadistic or sadistic, which will make readers uncomfortable. Then who will follow the book? The early stages can be a bit dull, and the progress in the later stages can be accelerated. After all, your book has a huge world view, and there should be no shortage of chapters.

Just looking at 50 pictures of Hammer does not necessarily mean you will become a third-rate force.

The author is more or less like Tiansha Lone Star. He must be tortured. If he is not tortured, he is not the protagonist. If you write ghosts like this, it depends on what you write. Real life is already very tiring. Most people read novels for pleasure and comfort, not for torture. I won't criticize you anymore. Think about it for yourself.

It took a lot of effort to find a female supporting role, but she also gave birth to a child for the protagonist. It was so damning that I no longer had the desire to continue reading.

Hope it doesn't end badly. . . . . . Come on, come on, come on

What I like most is that people are bad and good people. Can you help me? V me 50 to see my strength.