Perfect World Dragon Soaring
About This Novel
A little true dragon in the true dragon's nest, a descendant of the Ten Evils, causing trouble everywhere. Fight with the naughty boy against the sky, the earth, and the people, and together they will arbitrate for eternity and suppress the strange. (PS: It's only related to the trilogy. It won't happen in other worlds. It's a new work for beginners.)
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Official(235)Scraped 2mo ago
Can't understand at all
Yilong insists on treating himself as a person. Every plot feels like a passer-by, pretending to be cool and like a fool. He is so embarrassed that he is almost cancerous, and he looks like a dog licker. Without that strength, I feel like everyone is just a fish, even the Supreme One still looks down on Immortality. There is no sense of urgency at all, he looks down on the source of darkness, and he even forgets about his father's hatred. The description of the battle is like a gangster fight. You slap me and I punch you. There is no artistic conception of destroying the galaxy with your palm.
I also feel a little speechless.
Aren't dragons supposed to be proud? When I met Liu Shen, he was stronger than me and had a better attitude. But it's not good for people in Ishimura to give so many things as soon as they meet. Doesn't the dragon need majesty? Doesn't it need face?
It feels like all the time-travelers in the perfect fan fiction have become bitches, giving all kinds of good things to Shi Ritian,
Too much poison
The first time I met Liu Shen, I called her sister. I seriously suspect that the author has read too many romance novels in Mainland China, and thinks that if he calls her sister too often, he can win the heart of a girl. Also, the realm's combat power was severely damaged. The protagonist used the blood-moving realm to catch the angry blow of the Venerable, but he did not die. He also said that the ordinary king of array would have died long ago if he received this blow. Don't forget that you are the one who draws the blood. Healing and recovery are very fast. Don't say he is a real dragon. If his racial talent is so good, then why does the protagonist focus on being a human being instead of pretending to be a fake person? The entire protagonist's character is just a spectator, a gift-giving expert. Other than that, there is nothing outstanding about him. Emperor Huangtian can transcend time. If something slightly uncontrollable appears, I doubt he will emerge from the river of time and beat you to death. Finally, there are all kinds of inappropriate words coming out of the mouths of various characters. Liu Shen said to the protagonist, don't wander. Is this true? This is just like a cold character like Shi Yi saying, "Hey, hey, hey, come and eat Laoba's little hamburger." If you want to change your character, write a novel with a new worldview and don't add drama.
All perfect novels. It seems that I can't write without following Shi Ritian.
So-so.
It feels a bit like a novice novel, especially the dragon is written like a human being, without any characteristics at all.
Is the protagonist too humble?
I think the protagonist is too humble in front of Liu Shen.
Forget it, I won't watch it anymore. I'm having a heart attack after watching it.
Stop writing. The novel world of the perfect world is not suitable for you. The plot is not perfect at all. The son of a dignified dragon has become a licking dog.
The protagonist gives away the treasure to the boy and returns the farm to the dog...
They already have a harem, why should they give Yuechan and Yunxi to Shi Hao? The fanfic you write needs to be a little imperfect, right? Wouldn't it be better if Shi Hao let him and Huo Ling'er be a couple for the rest of their lives? I'm not a fan of original novels, but a fan of anime. I'm a fan of perfect harem stories. I don't accept Yue Chan and Yun Xi. I really can't accept it. They're so beautiful!
Why is the heroine given to Shi Hao, even if it is the original heroine, but if you write a fanfic and it is not a direct original work, then what is the point of writing this book? Don't Yue Chan and Yun Xi smell good? Shi Hao can just Huo Ling'er, why should you follow the original work?
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Official(235)Scraped 2mo ago
Can't understand at all
Yilong insists on treating himself as a person. Every plot feels like a passer-by, pretending to be cool and like a fool. He is so embarrassed that he is almost cancerous, and he looks like a dog licker. Without that strength, I feel like everyone is just a fish, even the Supreme One still looks down on Immortality. There is no sense of urgency at all, he looks down on the source of darkness, and he even forgets about his father's hatred. The description of the battle is like a gangster fight. You slap me and I punch you. There is no artistic conception of destroying the galaxy with your palm.
I also feel a little speechless.
Aren't dragons supposed to be proud? When I met Liu Shen, he was stronger than me and had a better attitude. But it's not good for people in Ishimura to give so many things as soon as they meet. Doesn't the dragon need majesty? Doesn't it need face?
It feels like all the time-travelers in the perfect fan fiction have become bitches, giving all kinds of good things to Shi Ritian,
Too much poison
The first time I met Liu Shen, I called her sister. I seriously suspect that the author has read too many romance novels in Mainland China, and thinks that if he calls her sister too often, he can win the heart of a girl. Also, the realm's combat power was severely damaged. The protagonist used the blood-moving realm to catch the angry blow of the Venerable, but he did not die. He also said that the ordinary king of array would have died long ago if he received this blow. Don't forget that you are the one who draws the blood. Healing and recovery are very fast. Don't say he is a real dragon. If his racial talent is so good, then why does the protagonist focus on being a human being instead of pretending to be a fake person? The entire protagonist's character is just a spectator, a gift-giving expert. Other than that, there is nothing outstanding about him. Emperor Huangtian can transcend time. If something slightly uncontrollable appears, I doubt he will emerge from the river of time and beat you to death. Finally, there are all kinds of inappropriate words coming out of the mouths of various characters. Liu Shen said to the protagonist, don't wander. Is this true? This is just like a cold character like Shi Yi saying, "Hey, hey, hey, come and eat Laoba's little hamburger." If you want to change your character, write a novel with a new worldview and don't add drama.
All perfect novels. It seems that I can't write without following Shi Ritian.
So-so.
It feels a bit like a novice novel, especially the dragon is written like a human being, without any characteristics at all.
Is the protagonist too humble?
I think the protagonist is too humble in front of Liu Shen.
Forget it, I won't watch it anymore. I'm having a heart attack after watching it.
Stop writing. The novel world of the perfect world is not suitable for you. The plot is not perfect at all. The son of a dignified dragon has become a licking dog.
The protagonist gives away the treasure to the boy and returns the farm to the dog...
They already have a harem, why should they give Yuechan and Yunxi to Shi Hao? The fanfic you write needs to be a little imperfect, right? Wouldn't it be better if Shi Hao let him and Huo Ling'er be a couple for the rest of their lives? I'm not a fan of original novels, but a fan of anime. I'm a fan of perfect harem stories. I don't accept Yue Chan and Yun Xi. I really can't accept it. They're so beautiful!
Why is the heroine given to Shi Hao, even if it is the original heroine, but if you write a fanfic and it is not a direct original work, then what is the point of writing this book? Don't Yue Chan and Yun Xi smell good? Shi Hao can just Huo Ling'er, why should you follow the original work?
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