It Turns Out That I Am the Old Patriarch of the Xiao Family

The protagonist said to Xiao Yan, dear grandson, you have really good vision. From now on, these will be your grandma.

Xiao Lin traveled through time and found that he had become the grandson of the future Emperor Dou. Instead of waiting for future generations to work hard, he might as well plant trees for his predecessors to enjoy the shade and make the family prosperous as soon as possible.

The reason why I gave it five stars is mainly because I finally found a Dou Po fan novel without a female protagonist, because I have never found a real Dou Po or Douluo fan novel without a female protagonist in Qidian and QQ Reading. So, it is very sad. Now that I have found it, it can be regarded as a sustenance in my heart.

The setting of the story is good, but the writing is not good. I don't know whether the author deliberately overstates the numbers or is simply a poor writer. I have read more than 400 chapters now. Overall, the novel has no bad points and the plot is very reasonable. However, the proportion of narration and preface in each chapter is too heavy. Sometimes some sentences are really nonsense literature and there is no need to write them. Sometimes one sentence can describe good things, and the author has to write hundreds of words before jumping back into the plot. When writing an article, it should be concise and concise, not like an old lady's footcloth, which is smelly and long. The reader is not a three-year-old child, but still has a certain understanding. There is no need for the author to tell the story in detail. Sometimes it is better to leave a little blank space for the reader to imagine. That's all I have to say. If the author likes to hear it, just listen to it. If you don't like it, forget it. These words are my suggestions as a reader and do not target the author in any way.

Brother, it's almost done. When will this water stop? Just skip the unnecessary parts. It will take more than a hundred chapters to start the plot like this...

The system is not good. Might as well change to a blackened system. Drop! Chaos bodies are rewarded because the host is too weak. Supreme Bone. Double pupils. The divine elephant has the power to suppress the prison. He transforms the Dharma into freedom. The family blackening rewards (random spiritual body, holy body, divine body) are increased by hundreds of millions because the host's talent is too weak. The black family can share one ten thousandth of the talent. Might as well write like this

If you hadn't told Xiao Yan that you were also a time traveler, I might still be able to watch it! ! ! ! If you directly tell others that you are a time traveler, why don't you tell others that you have a system? Why don't you go to the Hun Clan and tell Hun Tian Emperor that you have a system, and as long as you help me, I can make you the Dou Emperor? ? ? It's so troublesome to develop on your own

I have been writing about how to develop a family, but I haven't seen much help from the family to the protagonist. The pace seems fast but feels very slow. This is because the author did not grasp the pace. In the early stage, I wrote a lot about Yun Yun and Nalan Yanran, but it felt useless.

Faced with his own good spiritual roots and strength, and more importantly, the golden finger of the system to help Xiao Lin, Xiao Lin's becoming stronger is just around the corner.

It's like traveling through a low-level martial arts plane. The fantasy has to be more exciting. You've made it flashy. In the original work, Xiao Zhan and Yao Lao were caught after wandering around for decades, and the other clan members were all alive and well. The system you have is so cowardly!