My Soul, the God of Death, is on Top of You

I've only read the first five chapters so I can only comment on the first five chapters. First of all, there is the issue of the reason for time travel. There are billions of people on the earth and countless people die every day. It is a bit problematic to believe that the 888 dead people can be resurrected and given rights and permissions. But to be fair, who reads novels to see the reasons for time travel? So although this is poisonous, it can be ignored. But the plot points that followed continued one after another. I don't see much of the most basic typos, but the impression is very poor, as if I'm watching everyone looking for trouble. There aren't many typos that offend me, so it's best to correct them if possible. The second is a very similar issue. Let's not talk about whether the image of a saint and a gangster is a certain Hanged Man from the Forbidden City. It doesn't matter if the protagonist's image is a certain 5t5. Even if the average setting problem is whether it is a certain anime of the same name, it can be tolerated. After all, fan fiction, it doesn't matter if it's a mess. Moreover, it is the foreshadowing of the early stage of the plot, which I can understand. I can still read this novel with optimism. The main problem is the collapse of the character design. A certain Hanged Man who is not hanging upside down is described as an emotionless power machine. However, when the protagonist saves people, he is emotionally moved and his understanding is closer to the average anime. In fact, this is a character that only appears once. What if someone has some unspeakable experience? But the protagonist can't be established. When he first appeared, he had an excellent and calm image that could tell his parents that he was brave enough to do what is right. That dull feeling came over me. But after traveling through time, he immediately transformed into an image of a happy person similar to a certain Shan. In just five chapters, the protagonist's character was thrown into the dust without forcibly changing the character due to the plot. What I can't understand is that the author of this book can actually maintain a moderate level of writing skills while making so many stupid mistakes. Later, I saw the author's several completed novels with more than a million words, including this one, and I had an idea. The author still has some ideas, but has no systematic training at all. Although it must be admitted that such related materials can easily turn the author into a cookie-cutter coding machine, you can still take a look at the most basic writing process. I roughly guessed that the author did not set an outline before writing, and completely let the work unfold freely, whatever came to mind and was written down. It's three o'clock in the morning, and I had no intention of writing these comments. I deleted the book and left, but then I saw that the author has written a book with millions of words and has more than 2,000 fans. I feel that this kind of author with perseverance and lack of supervision has a poor performance, so I still find the problems that can be found and solve them. As for how useful my words are and whether someone will criticize me, it doesn't matter.

The plot is updated every day and still drags on so much, it's really uncomfortable to watch.

Who is the heroine in this book?

The author's strength given by the author at the beginning is that he is an invincible existence, but when his sister just went to the protagonist's home, she hit the protagonist once without saying a few words. If you initially wanted to write that the two of them have a good relationship and like to fight and fight, then forget it. There are only a few of them, and one of them can be beaten almost ten times on average. The author wants to describe that the protagonist is a masochist who likes to think in his heart, my sister hits me, my sister hits me harder, my sister steps on me. Or do you want to say that the protagonist's sister is a fool, just to make the protagonist angry, and then let him take off the blindfold and crush her to death?

A good Chinese population, even if the protagonist wants to change and run away due to personality factors, but what does it mean to completely live a small life and insult my eyes? How many fandoms are written like this?

There is too little written, only one update a day

It's very annoying that the protagonist who is over 100 years old is beaten by her sister every day.

There's nothing interesting to read as written, nothing new at all. It's better to just watch the anime.

Who would like a naughty kid with no brains to be the protagonist?

The description is too long-winded and unpleasant.