Chat Group: Obtain Saiyan Blood at the Beginning
by Dudu Bear Second Generation
About This Novel
Su Xiaoqi, a developer of surface resources exploration, traveled to a world where he was the only human being. Bite! The password is correct, congratulations on getting the Saiyan bloodline. [Ding! Chat group created successfully] [Sakata Gintoki joins the chat group. [Nami joins the chat group. [Sakuragi Hanamichi joins the chat group. [Lu Linglong joins the chat group. [Zhu Zhuqing joins the chat group. ... As more and more people from all over the world join the group, the rhythm in the chat group begins to become more and more crooked. Su Xiaoqi: Sakuragi, that's not how basketball is played. I'm here to teach you. Sakata Gintoki: Gin-san, I have something wrong. Is there any girl who can help me? Nami: Want to have sex with me? Starting with 10,000 points. Zhu Zhuqing: Su Xiaoqi, come to Douluo Continent to cause trouble. Lu Linglong: I want points and I want to cause trouble. So... These people started to do crazy things in various worlds for points. Su Xiaoqi: Dear group members, the world is about to be ruined by you. Do you want to consider immigrating? I cover everything here.
What Readers Think
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Official(36)Scraped 5d ago
It looks half and feels average. First of all, the protagonist is too soft, almost like a cow, being led around by Zhu Zhuqing and other female members. Secondly, obviously having Saiyan blood is to suppress the fighting power, so why don't you practice hard? Third, there is the issue of the protagonist's luck in the lottery. Nami gets whatever she draws, and the protagonist is just some rubbish. Who is the protagonist?
fine
It's just that the main character is too soft, and I feel like he's being controlled by a woman. It's okay in the early stage, but I'll change it later, otherwise I'll be speechless.
If you really can't do it, don't write too many female protagonists. You know your writing is not good, but you still write it. You are really good.
You can't write well yourself, your writing style is not good, entertainment has to be more important than combat power, and IQ is more important, the direction of writing is wrong, and readers don't like it. I give you five stars at most because you are not easy to write this novel. How can I put it, I always feel that it is hopeless, even if you understand the situation differently, and... There is also a mistake in the understanding of combat power. People have not exposed you because they are used to it. However, this does not mean that you will be given extra points. On the contrary, points will definitely be deducted. When reading your novel, you cannot read too much, otherwise your novel will only eat dust in the library from now on, or simply move it out without taking up space.
The protagonist's character is too soft. He said he didn't want it, but ended up asking for it again.
I feel that because the author is obsessed with Zhu Zhuqing, he insists on treating Douluo Continent as the quasi-main world, and insists on arranging for the rationality of killing his people and taking away his wife for the protagonist. Then all other group members are in the style of complaining and comedy, but the protagonist is in the style of Long Aotian in Douluo Continent, which is very inconsistent. It is worth watching during the free period, but I always skipped the plot of Douluo Continent.
This hasn't been updated in months. I still want to support the next content.
Update quickly, update quickly. I've been waiting for more than half a month, please update soon.
Is it because there are no more Chinese novels, or are there some little Japanese ghosts here? ? ?
It's okay, come on, author. It's okay, come on, author.
When does the Gintama plot start?
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Community(0)
Official(36)Scraped 5d ago
It looks half and feels average. First of all, the protagonist is too soft, almost like a cow, being led around by Zhu Zhuqing and other female members. Secondly, obviously having Saiyan blood is to suppress the fighting power, so why don't you practice hard? Third, there is the issue of the protagonist's luck in the lottery. Nami gets whatever she draws, and the protagonist is just some rubbish. Who is the protagonist?
fine
It's just that the main character is too soft, and I feel like he's being controlled by a woman. It's okay in the early stage, but I'll change it later, otherwise I'll be speechless.
If you really can't do it, don't write too many female protagonists. You know your writing is not good, but you still write it. You are really good.
You can't write well yourself, your writing style is not good, entertainment has to be more important than combat power, and IQ is more important, the direction of writing is wrong, and readers don't like it. I give you five stars at most because you are not easy to write this novel. How can I put it, I always feel that it is hopeless, even if you understand the situation differently, and... There is also a mistake in the understanding of combat power. People have not exposed you because they are used to it. However, this does not mean that you will be given extra points. On the contrary, points will definitely be deducted. When reading your novel, you cannot read too much, otherwise your novel will only eat dust in the library from now on, or simply move it out without taking up space.
The protagonist's character is too soft. He said he didn't want it, but ended up asking for it again.
I feel that because the author is obsessed with Zhu Zhuqing, he insists on treating Douluo Continent as the quasi-main world, and insists on arranging for the rationality of killing his people and taking away his wife for the protagonist. Then all other group members are in the style of complaining and comedy, but the protagonist is in the style of Long Aotian in Douluo Continent, which is very inconsistent. It is worth watching during the free period, but I always skipped the plot of Douluo Continent.
This hasn't been updated in months. I still want to support the next content.
Update quickly, update quickly. I've been waiting for more than half a month, please update soon.
Is it because there are no more Chinese novels, or are there some little Japanese ghosts here? ? ?
It's okay, come on, author. It's okay, come on, author.
When does the Gintama plot start?
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