On the Other Side of the Door is the Pirate King

From the current point of view, it is generally okay, but it is too nepotistic. Helping them does not require you to use them all. Your original intention is to lead them to prosperity together, but can you guarantee that they will never change their minds? If others are corrupt, you can send them in without blinking an eye. If they corrupt you, your seven aunts and eight aunts will beg you on their knees. Will you still send them in? If you don't give it to everyone to study, it would be unscrupulous to give it to everyone. After all, your tuition fees are all raised by them! When the company develops to a certain level and relatives become stepping stones for progress, are you willing to take action? You can suppress a group of relatives when you are here, but what if you are gone? You say that Zhu Yuanzhang conquered the world with one village brother, but he would kill 70% to 80% of his brothers for the sake of his grandson. What will you do when you encounter the same situation as Zhu Yuanzhang?

The writing is good, but why do people who travel through time travel and have extraordinary abilities do business? Shouldn't this situation be about making a quick sum of money after selling one or a kind of thing, and then concentrate on learning extraordinary abilities? For example: I have a seal of two realms.

I remember that in ancient China, there were swords first and then knives. Isn't it good to export this culture? If people don't distinguish between swords and swords, why don't you follow suit? If you are holding a knife now and go out and tell others that it is a sword and see how they will answer you, I am afraid you have been exported by someone's reverse culture!

But I feel like the real world is poorly written, whether it's a family business or some adjustments in the factory, it's like self-pleasure

You can travel across the world. Still so obsessed with money. Strengthening yourself is fundamental. It makes people speechless, and it doesn't look good after just a few pictures.

On the one hand, there is the temptation of extraordinary immortality, and on the other hand, there is the desire to promote the development of the original world. It is difficult to control without strong writing style. Secondly, the description of the extraordinary is too weak. The technology and force of the pirate world are not low, and the world is also very chaotic. Being a novice in the world requires a long time of preparation. A protagonist like the protagonist who wants to cause trouble right away is not strong enough and can easily be tricked to death.

After reading a few chapters, he released a poison and directly brought people from the One Piece world to the earth. Does such a person deserve a golden finger? A fool

The dialogue, plot, etc. Are too naive. I really can't do it without thinking. If I don't have the experience and writing skills, you can just write about battles if you write about pirates.

1: It's easy to get guns, but hard to get bullets. If there is a space door, go to the American gun store in Iraq and get it. 2: Find a failed agriculture student and put his name on the fruit. You can buy him normally to gain reputation. 3: Amoxicillin is a mass-controlled drug. You have a production line and no sales data. Do you want to go to war? 4: Selling amoxicillin is too cheap. If you buy it for 500, Ocean King will dare to sell it for 200,000 in these basements. Because the quantity is small, one production line is not enough in the big Pirate World. Do you dare to add more lines? Or do you want to fight?

Brother, I suggest you forget about being a eunuch and learn more from other people's improvements.