Learn Magic from Hogwarts

If Eve is the heroine, just say directly, I am easy to abandon, so why don't I want Zhang Zhang to appear? Don't ask me why I abandon my girlfriend when I have an eleven or twelve-year-old child falling in love? Let's shoot them one by one (ﾉಥBenefitಥ)

Some book friends complained about the heroine, and the author even replied. He thought he would be restrained, but the more he wrote, the more he wrote, and the story of the mysterious father PUA came out. It just feels dirty, it feels disgusting

There are too many flaws. As a wizard who cheated, he was caught by a group of squibs. And then the reason why he survived was inexplicable, and he was involved in a terrorist attack. Shouldn't he be more excited to see the cubs? Or will they just arrest but not kill? Also, being captured by the portkey felt a little too deliberate, it felt like it was just to push the plot forward.

In fact, the author's writing is quite good, much better than many Potter fans. Most of the Potter fans started to intervene when Potter entered school, and took adventures with the future Minister of Magic and her two flaws. The heroine was probably Hermione, or Luna, or Fleur. Then the protagonist entered school to save Hermione, destroy trolls, destroy Quirrell, destroy Voldemort's Horcruxes, Quidditch champion... I personally feel that the poor performance of this book is probably due to the above reasons. The protagonist enters school early, the plot is an original new plot that is not found in the original work, and the readers have no sense of involvement, and Goldfinger has no feeling at all. But even so, I still think the author's writing is quite good. I haven't read the original work or the movie. My love for this series of works comes from reading fan novels. It is because I have read other books that are similar to others that I think your writing is very good. Although my grades are not good, I still have the support of book friends. Even if I really can't bear it anymore, I just want to avoid having an appendix and enter the palace👿 I just hope that these heartfelt words can give the author a little warmth. Come on, author! ! !

Don't you want to watch romance, learn magic and do things well?

The author still has some ideas, but it's a pity that they are only suitable for those who have never read other Harry fan fictions. The more I read, the more inexplicable they become. They are all full of flaws.

It's not bad at the front, but it's a bit weird at the back. I was hit and followed by the same person. He knew there was a problem and knew he was being watched but didn't take care of it. Just waiting for bad luck?

Nowadays, Harry Potter fan fiction likes to lay out foreshadowings of the protagonist's life experience, for example: one of his parents is a member of the Order of the Phoenix and was killed by Voldemort (and therefore favored by the principal); he has a terrible curse on his body; he is a descendant of a certain magical family.

The new book is almost ready, go back and write Ultraman

To be honest, writing about Harry Potter is not as popular as the one next door, which also writes about Harry Potter, but it is much less popular.