Cultivation: Start from the Proficiency Panel

You haven't written it clearly yet, so practice more. What readers fear most is that they don't get the benefits of all kinds of wrangling, and they don't get what they want, which is not in line with the law of interests. The rest of the plot is very confusing and can be guessed. It's just about getting the skills, having a little ambiguity with a woman, and then owing some favors. In fact, the character you wrote starts to slowly develop.

When the protagonist decides on his own foundation-building method, he should ignore everything and just wait for the time to break through the foundation-building method, instead of going out to take care of a bunch of bad things and get into trouble. It's better not to talk about other places. It's a rare high-qualified immortal cultivator with plug-in and magic power. It's just a slow pace and a lot of trouble, and the map can be changed a long time ago.

Didn't the ancestor of the Chen family die long ago? Resurrected again? All kinds of donkey heads and horse mouths? ! ! !

What did you do with your brain after two lifetimes? You are a novice in cultivating immortals. The first time you went to Fangshi, your low status was exposed, and you directly joined a shop as a talisman master? ? ? ?

In two lifetimes, I have acted without any brains. A second-year Qi practitioner, even though he can draw talismans, cannot be so arrogant. He offended the sect monks at the beginning. Is this a brainless thing? Why don't you act in such a high-profile manner? Are you afraid that others won't know that you have money? Also, you are afraid that others don't know where your home is and still sell it to you, so a Qi Practicing 4 person will come into your home and make you cry without even having tears in your eyes.

What are you writing about? Do I need to register to sell things at a stall?

If you have strength, you are awesome. You are so arrogant on the second level of Qi training.

This world of cultivating immortals should be a slave society, because his great power belongs to himself. You wrote him like today's European and American legal countries, fair and just and honest. So everyone feels a little awkward when they see it. Can't you see there are so many black factory authors in the park today? So may I ask the author, what is the ending waiting for you at the second level of qi training and talisman training? To write articles on cultivating immortals, you must have a strong background. We call this kind of articles cool. Either you write about the darkness, shamelessness, and selfishness of human nature like a mortal's journey to immortality. Most people now like to read this kind of thing because it is logical.