Night Falls: I Use Words to Kill Through the Wasteland

What's the point of separation? The heroine will not grow faster if she leaves the protagonist than if she follows him. She is able to absorb the marrow stone because of the protagonist.

I couldn't stand it after reading chapter 20. Such a rotten world can be said to be a world where people eat people. The protagonist in the description is too bottom-lined, just like a gentleman or a saint, and has a strong sense of morality. Not to mention that the protagonist is strong, the key is that he is a weakling. Teaming up with others to dig for black crystals was supposed to be a matter of fate, but in the end, people died, and the protagonist took the initiative to compensate these dead people. During one trip, he dug up eight kilograms of black crystals and brought them back, and the protagonist paid back some money to compensate. Laughing to death.

It's too useless to hang up. It's more than a hundred chapters and you don't want to say that Novice Village is invincible? Don't you want a lap to hug? Still want to be a lone wolf?

It's too detailed, the plot and supporting characters are too detailed, I can't watch it.

In an apocalyptic setting with superpowers, both socialism and collectivism are feasible. Ordinary people cannot survive independently. They can only rely on groups, and groups must have basic rules. The problem with this book is that it lacks many basic rules as a gathering place for ordinary people.

The beginning is terrible, only the first ten chapters are readable, and the more I write, the worse it gets.

There is so much nonsense. I wonder if the author has never watched the TV series. People don't want to talk when they are hungry.

The author's plot is a bit fast-paced. He goes out twice and encounters more crises each time. There is no development period at all, so it will be very tiring to read! Especially when it comes to Chapter 50, the protagonist doesn't have a single powerful or life-saving skill. He only has two auxiliary skills + a long-term training skill + a 20% power increase skill that is useless in the short term. This development speed is seriously inappropriate! Especially the ultra-fast plot rhythm coupled with the ultra-slow development rhythm makes it really uncomfortable to watch! There should be a development plot to balance out the rhythm of the plot, and the protagonist should also grow a little faster, such as making the protagonist an awakener! To be honest, I got a little tired after reading more than 40 chapters. If the protagonist goes out for the third time soon and encounters a big crisis + a big opportunity, then readers like me will basically not be able to continue reading! It can be said that the current plot advancement relies entirely on two teammates who have just met to be loyal, not greedy, and very useful. This is not appropriate!

It's okay if your protagonist's character is a bit of a loser, but after reading dozens of photos, your mother's Goldfinger is also a loser.

I think it's okay, keep writing and don't stop updating😣