Immortal Ju Hua in the Wilderness Era

There are more than 100 chapters in the book about a mentally retarded sister, and only 30 chapters are about my wife. I can't bear the fact that a female apprentice is included in the first order. I wonder, uncle, are you okay? Can't you please stop writing this kind of ancient novel plot? You fan who writes about Tomato, do you think Tomato keeps talking about this? If someone makes an initial order of tens of thousands, how much is your first order? So don't write based on your own ideas. Readers will vomit when they see your sister and female apprentice. If you want to make things easier, just write something that readers will like. We are not here to see this kind of woman in Manghuang Ji.

If it were me, I would have many ways to kill the character of the protagonist. The weakness is too obvious. The protagonist's character flaws are too great. As long as you know the protagonist a little bit, there are many ways to kill this kind of person. This kind of person, this kind of protagonist is too self-righteous. You think you are right to be nice to others, but you will kill them. His sister would be killed sooner or later by his method. I don't understand where the protagonist got this idea, is he an adult? Not letting your loved ones know the real world, real adult thoughts. You think you are protecting him, what a weird idea. There is no right or wrong in the adult world, only your stance and your position.

Of course, for a complete newcomer like me, I thought about writing about Tongren in the Manghuang Ji at first, but I couldn't figure out how to write about Enlightenment, so I had to try to write about Wudong Tongren first. After all, there is not so much Enlightenment, so it is a little easier to write😊

Generally speaking, the quality of the book is good, which is why I can read it. The plot is okay and not too bad. In addition, I have never understood whether Ju Hua resurrected his parents because of the author's temporary interest or something else. I don't understand this. Is it really to make up for regrets? Or foreshadowing? To sum up, the book is pretty good. This is the first one I have read in two years that has nearly 400 chapters. The main reason is that there are so few good books in the past few years. Also, come on, author, I will always support you. Come on, just don't talk too much and write more. Don't be too hard-working or I will run out of books. Come on, Syria, distracting thoughts are just distracting thoughts. Clear them out before you can enter the spiral ascending mode. Come on!

The little girl and the Taoist couple in the first hundred chapters are extremely poisonous, and Shen Nong has not reached the end of his cultivation and cannot resist it. The younger sister who is a few years younger is raised to be silly and sweet, and then the protagonist arranges for the second soul to secretly protect the younger sister to become self-reliant and self-reliant (at least to be able to safely survive the tribulation of the gods and demons). The protagonist suddenly transforms into a mortal in the game world, and has been dating a mortal woman for 30 years using illusions. Such a noble love, arranging for a deceived mortal woman to become a Taoist couple, this kind of poison is too powerful. These two women dropped three stars out of nowhere, (at least the characters they portrayed were not only well-written and plotted, but also reacted to the road, and I was speechless.) Compared to the author's previous book, the heroine of this book is so praise-worthy 🤤

Why should you choose the way of swordsmanship? You are a fan, and it should be different from the original work. Isn't it possible that the way of swordsmanship, spear way, halberd way, ax way, etc. Are not suitable! Choosing kendo will make people lose their desire to read books!

People, gods and true immortals, can kill hundreds of people in the aftermath of a fight, just like the blue rat in Wu Dong Qian Kun Dong, who can collapse and kill several Lin Dong with one fart, like that!

Friends who prefer the Invincible Genius genre should find it more suitable. The writing is good and there is nothing particularly toxic. It is a very good fanfic of Manghuangji.

The protagonist is already a loose immortal, so how can he become a true immortal? In the original work, loose immortals are destined to die under a catastrophe.

Everything else is okay. The heroine and her sister are really poisonous. If you don't know how to write, don't write. It's just to lower your score.