Infinity, Starting from Eternity

First, there is too much nonsense, and the number of words is blatantly watery! Entering the world is a foreshadowing of ten chapters, entering the Yuhua Gate is a foreshadowing of ten chapters, the outer gate, the inner gate, and the secret realm of magical powers, which can be less than ten chapters, and more than thirty or forty chapters. I'm not saying that there are ten or twenty chapters. If it is an important plot, I will definitely not criticize you for dozens of chapters. But, really, there are too many things that are not important. . . Second, the problem of reincarnation. At first, I thought it was normal, with one (protagonist) reincarnation in a single world. But in the end, you mixed many reincarnations into the same world just to create new ideas, right? OK! It's not bad for multiple people to reincarnate! But, obviously here, you failed! If you can't write about multiple people reincarnating in the same world, you can't write well! Others, such as Zhao Ling'er and Lu Xueqi, seem to be background boards. They only appear when the protagonist encounters a problem and help the protagonist pass the level! What's the use of writing like this? It's not as good as the protagonist's single-player world, taking advantage of all opportunities, at least the plot won't change much! What now? There are many people, and there are quite a lot of them, but so far, the plot has had very little deviation? ! Are you kidding me? ! In the Xuanhuang World alone, one of the ten sects of immortality, you have arranged for one sect: Zhao Ling'er, Ouyang Feng, Lu Xueqi, and other reincarnations! So what about the entire Immortal Path? What about magic? What about the Xuanhuang World? What about the fairy world? ? What about the eternal universe? ? ? . . . Therefore, Feng hates authors who overestimate their abilities very much! Is your reading volume large? Is your writing style awesome? Is your creative thinking broad? How many fans do you have? Are you a platinum expert or a novice author? . . . I thought too much when I started writing, but I ended up writing, but the question is, did I write well? As of now, in my personal eyes, the plot of eternal life is unreasonable after the protagonist enters the Yuhua Gate! Originally, I thought about skipping it and going to see the new world, but hey, it's still the same! There are a lot of reincarnations in the same world, and the plot collapse is very small! Is this reasonable? How funny! . . . Slipping away.

The world of immortality is a complete mess. It's obviously about magical powers but it focuses on the physical realm. It's full of nonsense. The second world is even more outrageous. I don't know why the protagonist is talking nonsense to those people who added more money. The reason given is to learn the alchemy of fighting spirit. There is a fully automatic one without the need to pursue manual. Really eternal life is a bit poisonous. I can't bear it. What you wrote later is a waste of money.

A hodgepodge, it looks a bit awkward

It only takes one hundred chapters to get the magic power, I don't dare to think about how much water there will be behind it.

After Chapter 200, the golden elixir was directly used to create objects, and the combat power has collapsed. Although there are Dao weapons, it is still too outrageous, even more outrageous than the original work.

The gap between realm and strength should not be too big. Nowadays, it is no longer popular to pretend to slap someone in the face with a low realm but a high output. It is very uncomfortable to watch. You have to have strength but your realm must keep up. After all, the aura exuded by a strong realm will make weak people less likely to mess with you. But the realm is so low. There are nine people in the same world who want to step on you. This kind of behavior with a huge gap in fighting power is very uncomfortable to watch. It will cause you to be very strong in combat, but every time you meet different people, you have to fight to prove your strength. This was the way it was written in the past, but it is not used much now. It is uncomfortable to watch.

The author is not good. Shouldn't everyone in the eternal world just say, "Kneel down, kowtow, admit your mistake, and be my slave?"

If these reincarnations change the plot of the eternal world, then there is no need for you, the protagonist, to travel through time. Isn't it just waiting for you to change the plot? If you ask them to change the plot in advance, you won't come.

Stitches Ouyang Feng and Lu Xueqi didn't want to see anything they saw, what rubbish

Damn it, I don't know if the original novel of Yongsheng is also so embarrassing. You're finished at every turn. You're finished. You're so brainless.