Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Immortality

When I first read this book, I thought it was very interesting, but later I felt that the main character was too Holy Mother. Actually, I thought that the main character, Holy Mother, was probably because I was too narrow-minded. Because from all aspects, the protagonist's outlook on life is well portrayed. He is neither arrogant nor impetuous, nor hasty nor slow. As a Chinese time traveler, he has inherited the spirit of the 21st century. In fact, the protagonist is already immortal, and there is no need to pursue invincibility in the world. There is a saying that is good, being kind to others means being kind to yourself. In addition, the author's writing style is very good, his ideas are broad, and his subject matter is novel. In this era of following the trend of online novels, the author's type of books is undoubtedly a breath of fresh air. The daily routines, plots, conspiracies, and fighting plots are refreshing and have a big pattern. However, this book is still a bit lacking. If it is insufficient, I will not write it. I hope the author can maintain this kind of writing style and this kind of thinking in the next book, and then become a god in one fell swoop. Come on!

The setting and writing are both good, but the male protagonist's judgment on worldly matters is very poor, especially in the part about buying ginseng and reading the diary. I have some messy inner thoughts about buying ginseng. He wanted to sell the old ginseng for more money, but the male protagonist took out all the money. In the end, the old ginseng was only 10 taels. What the hell kind of logic is this? In the junior brother's diary, no matter how you look at it, the senior brother is right and he rejected the woman at the beginning. It was the woman who insisted on sending her up, and the senior brother has already done his best to be kind and righteous. On the other hand, this little junior brother is as boring as a gourd. He likes but doesn't say anything and doesn't lick him. Why do he think that girls will fall in love with him if he works hard at cultivation? Love is not like a horse race, as long as you surpass the other person, you will win. If it is true that the woman likes him because he has surpassed his senior brother in cultivation, then that woman is nothing more than a show. In my opinion, he is even worse than a licking dog and has no right to criticize others. I don't know what sympathy there is for such people.

I've read a hundred chapters and can't help but comment. I have been reading for more than ten years, and there are not many books that are so comfortable to read now. Hold on, come on.

As a bookworm with eight years of online writing experience, this article is exquisitely written, the characters are detailed, and the storyline is even more fascinating. The only drawback is that the update is a bit slow, so please give it a try! I will keep pursuing him, because I am a student party, so there are not many rewards. All I can give you is three recommendation votes per day. 😘😘😘

Obviously, many times the opponent's strength is defeated, but just like the mage, he has to read a message (say a lot of words) before he can pretend to be the boss, while the villain needs to kill first in close combat and then talk...

I'm a little speechless. The protagonist transformed from a mortal to a god just after practicing. He didn't know what level this god was. When he became a monk, he boasted that he could kill the city god with one breath. Later, he fled to the county as if he was fleeing from the sects with gathered spiritual energy. Is it true that the protagonist of the sect is powerful or not, even if he can conquer the city but is afraid that others will kill him?

Sometimes it's daily leisure, sometimes it's grand and grand, which suits my taste.

But the writing is so rough, I feel like there is nothing left to write. When you learn to fly, you can't fly with a sword. You can also fly with a sword. You can catch clouds in a few chapters. I admire you. Also, do you think this is any different from your sword? Do you want to shout somersault cloud before flying? You will hit two, but you will not hit two.

It doesn't look very smooth and it's too watery

It's quite uncomfortable to watch. From the beginning, I wrote that I am super powerful and at the level of a great monk, but I am obedient when doing things. Why don't you write some plots? After you write them, he will just watch them and just watch them. Then what are you doing writing those plots? - I read the previous article. One thing, there is basically no fighting scene. They are all pretending, or not taking action, just watching. The first flower picker, you just looked at it without making a move. You also looked at the second ginseng essence. I don't know what you did without handwriting. It's so long-winded.