Traveling Through the Heavens Begins with Shooting the Eagle

Shooting Condor (1-108), Tianlong (109-192), Zhu Xian (broken update) Under the guise of Zhu Tianliu, readers are tricked into killing them, and they can be made up as they wish! The writing is not bad, pure yy writing, the protagonist has a good outlook on life, no bad habits, nothing special, the best NPC, a Buddhist life, just enough fighting, the heart of a holy mother. Let's talk about the Condor Shooting chapter first. Not only did he not rob Huang Rong, but he also didn't rob the opportunity. He also liked to help others, working as a nanny for Guo Jing (euphemistically called making up for regrets), and by the way, he advanced the plot by running errands for the master. He was set as a time traveler, but he always forgot about the plot, euphemistically called it careless. The plot design is close to the original work, otherwise it would not be edited. The villains (for example, Yang Kang) are portrayed with such depth that they look more like the protagonists than the protagonists. It is not an exaggeration to say that they are children of luck. Anyway, the protagonists cannot be killed every time they face each other, otherwise they would not be able to continue the series. Besides, when it comes to the classification of cultivation realms, there is no such thing as first-class innateness. It only depends on whether the martial arts skills are awesome or not. Anyway, it's just bragging. Let's see how I make it up! ! ! [Emot=default,15/] Let's talk about Tianlong, traveling around aimlessly to make up for his regrets. Meet Qiao Feng, help! When you meet Duan Yu, help him! Anyway, if you don't improve your own strength, the most unacceptable thing is that you are afraid that Duan Yu won't have enough opportunities, so you give opportunities to others (Wu Yazi's internal strength, the leader of the Xiaoyao sect), so you just lick it? Is it that without you, they would not be able to achieve the achievements in the original article? Qiao Feng was at least worthy, but was Duan Yu worthy of being a bitch? He even helped someone identify his sister and died of poison! Let's talk about Duan Zhengchun. He is a scumbag and is irresponsible. Although he did not abandon his wife and daughters, in the end he was forgiven by his daughters and accepted their marriage. Is this kind of scumbag worthy? The key is that the protagonist also pulls the strings, euphemistically calling it to make up for regrets, what a holy mother! [Emot=default,39/] A message to the author: Put aside the plot to help others and respect the fate of others. [Emot=default,41/]

Why did it die after a month of maintenance? It was also said that the update is slow and it should be maintained first.

The author greatly brings the next world. Can you write a costume drama? Do you know if it should be green fat, red and thin? I saw it, please reply

The plot is too boring and the main character seems to have no role in the plot.