Longevity Begins with Smile and Pride

Longevity Begins with Smile and Pride

by You Have The Final Say

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1.6Mwords267chapters
Latest:
Ch. 267New Book "from Liancheng Jue to Achieving Martial Arts Myths
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6.8QD Score

About This Novel

This is the story of Zhuo Lingfeng, who carries the "Collection Pearl" to serve as a hero in the heavens, fights with the sword, conquers the world, and pursues immortality. "The Swordsman" and "Kunlun" are towering, and the earthworms shake the trees. "The Story of Slaying the Dragon by the Heaven", slaying the dragon with the oath of relying on the heaven. It all started when the master of Qingcheng planned the "Evil Sword Manual". Refining Dantian Qi internally and practicing special skills externally to protect yourself. The magical power of toad first became famous, and the Nine Yin Sutra shocked all living beings. I can gallop around the world as I wish, and my divine sword will fly to cut down the injustice. The invincible magical power shocks the world, and a sword goes to the west to end the world. Zhuo Lingfeng shook the world with his palms, and the shadow of his sword rolled across the rivers and lakes. He suddenly looked back: "If I don't rely on the Dugu Nine Swords, the Sunflower Book, or the evil sword technique, I am still invincible!"

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A Leisurely Listener36mo ago

Too wordy

If you were to write like this again, you would be so proud of yourself. How many millions of words would you have to write?

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Highbury Sky36mo ago

The author wrote carefully, but he took it too seriously and it was too wordy.

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Just Nine Thirty-nine33mo ago

It's not bad, but the author can't help but speak his mind, and the novel seems long and slow, but the plot and understanding of the original work are very high

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Like This Nickname30mo ago

The writing style is very good, but it is too verbose, and it makes Lin Pingzhi a moral perfect man, comparable to a saint. Who has not seen Swordsman? That is, a rich second-generation stupid young man has a bit of positive energy, but it is not obvious how much.

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Wuji Sizu Spokesperson27mo ago

There are already a lot of bugs in things and people in "Swordsman", but it's not true, it's all Jin Yong's imagination, and you are making more assumptions, and there are even more bugs! If your martial arts skills are fake, things will become even more fake, and what you do will become even more fake! No wonder the score is so low. Talk less and do more. There are too many dialogues and plots.

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Book Friends 20240619829_ca22mo ago

There is too much nonsense in this book. I can't stand it anymore.

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Cool Time 19034mo ago

I wrote it seriously, but I just don't know whether to write a novel or a narrative.

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Reader 164502114202424524836mo ago

Personally, I think it was written too slowly.

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Big and Small Cows and Monsters35mo ago

The author thinks too much. No one is perfect. He always wants to do everything in an all-round way.

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Nine Snails33mo ago

It's a pity to throw away tasteless food

I've reached chapter 135, and suddenly I don't feel like reading any more. It is true that the author has some skills, which is much better than most of the white articles written on the Internet.

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