Jiayou's Fun

1. Anping Prefecture is 20,000 miles long from east to west and 9,000 miles wide from north to south. According to the household registration book, there are more than 87 million households, 300 million men and 400 million women. There are probably the same number of other slaves and maids who are not listed in the household registration book. Zulong Prefecture has a radius of 360,000 miles and a population of one trillion. The Lu family has a fiefdom of tens of thousands of miles, a population of tens of billions, and millions of private troops. Does the author treat people as fools? 2. The lifespan of a powerful warrior is only one hundred and fifty, and that of an average warrior is nearly a hundred. This is still a theory. But according to the book's constant killing, in the ancient setting, people died every day, and it would be good to live to thirty. However, the author keeps recording tens of thousands of years ago. I don't see any means to keep the common tradition and continue to pass it on for tens of thousands of years. 3. Pei Yuan travels a thousand miles in a day, and Tuo Mai travels ten thousand miles in a day. You can roughly calculate that the speed is faster than the high-speed rail. It is positioned to write about "immortals", but the fact is that the fighting scenes described are extremely crotch-stretching, making it an ordinary martial arts novel. I have this speed and can directly kill my opponent. I don't see what's so awesome about the Immortal. Apart from living a long time and pretending to be a ghost, he's just like an ordinary mage, which is rubbish. 4. The protagonist says he just wants to live, Gou, but he keeps causing trouble. Every time Goldfinger doesn't feel the danger, so he goes to watch the excitement and pretends to be cool, and then suddenly feels the fatal danger and rushes to the street. Goldfinger shows off his power and kills with explosive power. When talking about seeking immortality, the time span description always mentions tens of thousands of years. However, the protagonist becomes almost invincible in a few years.

Just like there is some balance between evil and good, but extreme evil and extreme kindness are both very bad. A situation is like this world. Too much extreme evil makes the whole world bad.

I won't say anything about the break-up of the engagement at the beginning. It's poorly written. The description of the host's wife said that she had defeated several members of the clan. Do you know what a family is? That means people who are related by blood unite and rely on each other closely. You, a married woman, casually maiming clan members, really think that you are just a decoration for the older generation of the family. Do you treat clan members casually, is a woman qualified to do so? It's okay to deal with maids and servants, but even a branch clan member is not someone you, the mistress, can handle casually.

Lu Qian can be regarded as another existence in this world. Although at first he just wanted his relatives and friends around him to live the life they wanted, in the end he found that it was also very difficult to do, but what she wanted to do must be completed.

In this world, Lu Qian thinks about a very ordinary life. He doesn't have any big ideals. But in such a world, thinking about an ordinary and happy life is a difficult thing.

It can be seen that Xuehong wants to build a large fantasy world, but the writing power is not enough, and the mid-term combat power is about to collapse. Of course, this is also a common problem in fantasy. I just can't figure out why it is possible to narrow down the world view, clarify the main plot, and make the main characters more fleshed out, but it has to be the same as or even worse than the electronic waste on the list. At least others know their own position, which is cool, and the plot is at least compact. You are neither literary nor martial, even if the characters are simplified and the plot is stretched, it is not satisfying enough. There were a lot of poisons in the early stage, but Mrs. Hu was a big failure. She was too brainless. Being short-sighted does not mean being stupid. Businessmen, especially former businessmen, should be more flexible, but they are only limited by their own limitations. I feel that Xuehong did not write this point, and it gave people the impression that it was just needed by the plot. It's been 22 years, and I'm still writing this kind of book. In two years, I won't be able to make any money from this kind of book. Xuehong's writing skills have improved too little after so many years of writing. Look at other people's squid, each book is more mature than the last.

At the beginning, I was trying to persuade them to quit, but what age are they still engaging in annulment... Since ancient times, wealthy families have been in trouble. Although the head of the house and his wife are noble, they want to do whatever they want. What's more, if a branch lineage is the head of the family, it will take a lot of money to overwhelm the main lineage. There is also a clan that has been very united to the outside world since ancient times, and helps outsiders suppress the clan members. No one can stop such outrageous things. If you do this, people will be scattered. When an aristocratic family is attacked from the outside, there will always be some people who run out and start planning an uprising not long after. This is how the centipede worm is dead but not dead. Refer to the aristocratic families of the Six Kingdoms, they plan to start internal fights from the inside, and they fall apart soon. For example, the Sima family, the entire Pujie family does not follow rules and ethics. After the whole family was disbanded, no one left a name in history.

The writing is so messy and it's 9.9. How much did it cost to polish it? How many more have been deleted?

Hedong in thirty years, Hexi in thirty years had such a bad start! Without these, I can't write anymore😐😐😐

I started reading ten chapters, and I wanted to give a bad review. It's already 2202 years ago, and the author actually wrote a drama about breaking off the engagement. I was still thinking, can I still get platinum gold like this? Then I continued reading and found something. After reading 40 chapters, the more I read, the more I read, the more I read, the blood red 666