I Open a Black Shop in Another World

Today, my wife gave birth to an eight-pound boy. I am not well-educated, so I would like you to give yourself a name. My surname is Shi.

How many heroines does the author have in this book, and how many thousand words do you plan to write for this book? [Emot=default,29/]

There is no distinction between primary and secondary. The main character is briefly described, and the supporting characters are described in detail. This is one of the reasons for poor performance. Of course, it is not impossible to write supporting characters in detail, but it is not suitable for novice authors because the writing power is not enough. For example, there are two novels on my bookshelf that meet the requirements. Thank you for your personal opinion.

Qin Feng was deceived. He actually tricked the boss into treating him as his younger brother. Capricorn crabs are poisonous. One second they insist on being free, but the next second they regret it. Well, although the pill that can help him evolve is not easy to get.

This book is supposed to be a light and refreshing novel, with the protagonist and the black shop showing off. In the first few chapters, Yu Jie and Luo Tianqi took action. I felt a bit strange. The protagonist should take action. What I most wanted to see was Alsace or the protagonist showing off. Not to mention that after a few chapters, people would come to make trouble all day long. This repeated method felt a bit boring, as if the black shop had never killed a few people so far. The strangest thing to me is that at the beginning there was an old man who brought his apprentice to cause trouble, and his prostate almost died, but the old man was not killed? This is what I can't understand. The life of the prostate is not worth as much as those materials? Although you are a businessman, you must have a certain amount of patience. This will only make others think that you are easy to bully. I hope the author will change this and be more decisive. For example, this time Shangguan Lan is obviously looking for trouble. The protagonist should know that she is looking for trouble. If you still greet her with a smile like that, it is not pretending, that is cheap! You have a hard enough fist, but you don't have much say. To be honest, your subject matter is very good. I like this kind of subject very much. I have been looking for this kind of subject for a long time and without exception, I failed. The main thing is the feeling of being humble. Although your fist is hard enough, you have to follow it. Licking it like a dog, or the kind that soars into the sky, is invincible in the world, and kills anyone who doesn't buy it. I think that's what businessmen should be like. Be ordinary when you should be ordinary, and never hesitate when it's time to take action. In my mind, Qin Feng is ordinary Chatting with customers and engaging in various humorous daily routines. Occasionally going out to complete a task, setting up a stall to show off, and then when someone comes to make trouble, first reason with them, and when they don't make sense, just kill them with a sword. This is a businessman who tries his best to pursue peace, but sometimes he gets his way. Ruthless, what I say represents my personal opinion, a 600-word book review. To be honest, I have basically never written one. I really like this book. This represents some of my personal views on this book and some shortcomings of this book. I hope the author will adopt it. [Emot=default,10/]

Qin Feng's battle with the Thunder Wolf King was really hard for him. He wanted to fight but couldn't, so he had to rely on tactics to win. Well, I feel very frustrated when I look at it. It is obviously capable, but the hardware cannot keep up. How helpless. Congratulations on your full-time success

Update it soon

Anyway, this book is updated every day. Moreover, I am speechless due to its unstable nature. You might as well just write an ending. Save yourself the trouble. Anyway, you don't have time to write and we don't want to wait. It would be nice to write an ending so that we don't have to think about it.

One update a day is not enough, so I'll apologize in women's clothing.

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