Start Cultivating Immortality from Picking up Leaks

The novel is quite successful, but the author is really not good at writing fighting scenes and is very dramatic. He likes to use the perspective of ordinary people to write about the battles of immortal warriors. Examples are as follows ① Fire spells, which are famous for their lethality and explosion, are not as good as bows and arrows by the author. Apart from burning clothes, they can only be dodged by others. They are simply useless spells. You must know that the reason why the spells of immortal cultivators are powerful is because their spells can change directions at any time, are erratic and difficult to dodge, and basically hit the target immediately, instead of relying on aiming like bows and arrows. The spells are locked by divine consciousness. It can be said that the spells are issued very fast and have real-time locks. It is difficult to escape, the fire spell is very violent, and the damage is usually area damage. In addition to burning, there is also explosion damage caused by explosion. Therefore, many novels use defensive magic weapons or defensive spells to resist. I have not seen many immortal cultivating novels that can dodge spells. Therefore, the author writes about immortal cultivators from the perspective of ordinary people, and writes fire spells as rockets. In addition to burning people's clothes, they can only play a containment role, completely ignoring the explosive properties of fire. ② When the protagonist was rescuing his friend Shi Lei, he was actually injured by an ordinary person's puppet and turned into a puppet. It was nothing more than losing his mind. Even if his strength was improved compared to when he was awake, he was still ordinary after all. With the protagonist's strength as an immortal cultivator at the third level of Qi Refining, he was actually injured by an ordinary person. It was simply It's unbelievable, and when the protagonist found Shi Lei, he was helpless against the crazy Shi Lei. With your ghost vine skills, you just entangled him and kidnapped him. Therefore, the author still used ordinary people's thinking to write about immortal cultivators without changing his thinking, so the fighting scenes looked very dramatic and awkward.

Very few comments, really intolerable. A man with two lifetimes of experience, a man with opportunities and secrets, offended the entire royal family and sects of the entire country when he was not strong enough. He exposed his name and appearance everywhere, got involved in various whirlpools several times, and was killed several times. If you are smart enough to change countries, you will have to nest the dolls again. The setting is too big, and the quick park cannot be passed. A decimal method can only be obtained from other people's storage bags. How did those casual cultivators and those from the imperial dynasty survive?

Namo Amitabha Good people have a safe life 🙏🙏🙏

This plot setting does not match the character setting at all. Many plots are inexplicable.

You can't read the books that are limited to free of charge now. I always recommend this kind of rubbish.

The protagonist is really trying to find his parents in a thousand miles. The title of the book can be changed. If the protagonist's parents are dead, I think this is quite innovative and creative. In the end, the protagonist is thrown away and goes out to live freely. Later, it is time to look for their disgusting nonsense😐😐😐

The Immortal Immortal who cultivates spears and fights and kills him every day has written all these Immortals as short-lived ghosts.

Just look at the beginning of chapter 53, and you will know the level of the novel. I can't stand it anymore. It is pretending to be a force to attract hatred, and it is still harboring secrets.

The logic and plot must be reasonable and well-structured, with a sense of immersion and not out of touch. Don't just write whatever comes to mind. You must think carefully about the relationship between the context and the context.

Xiuxianguo is not suitable for me to read. No matter how well you write it, I won't read it. I didn't know about it before, and I'm not interested now.