The Fool's Game Begins with Spells

Hello everyone, I want to apologize to everyone. No matter if someone thinks I am showing off or whatever, I just want to do such a behavior. (Not discontinued) The results of my book are not good. In my plan, I will continue to update it until the end of this month, as a way to repay my readers. No matter what the intention is, at least I will do it myself, instead of being a white-eyed wolf. But on the 23rd, something big happened in my family. My uncle, who was healthier than me, suddenly passed away. Some people will say, he is just an uncle, why are you pretending? Do you want to create a character? I grew up with my grandmother, without a father or a mother. However, my grandmother passed away before I was 20 years old. My uncle has been taking care of me since I was lonely. He was the bridge between me and my relatives, but that day... The bridge was broken. Those who can understand my grief will definitely understand. Those who can't understand, I don't have time to explain now. I don't want to say that I feel so uncomfortable in front of my readers, but I really don't have time to update. I want to take over from my uncle and become a bridge between relatives. I have to take care of my sister and my aunt who is already in poor health. I need to accompany them through this difficult time. I hope everyone understands. Please don't abuse me. I really... Can't bear it anymore. I haven't cried since my grandmother passed away, and I have reached my limit.

Leave a comment on 2024.6.24: I haven't finished reading it yet, and I haven't had time to think about a more detailed evaluation, but there is nothing that makes me objectively disgusted, so I will give it five stars for now. Additional secondary edits on 2024.9.25: I didn't finish it... I watched some of it, then switched to QD and continued intermittently, only half of it, and I lost interest at all. The success is that the protagonist is designed to be a "madman" who is difficult to understand (no derogatory meaning, the term "madman" means that some of his actions and thoughts are difficult for some people to understand and accept. Since I choose to read on, it means that I accept the character of the protagonist, and I will not have any opinions until he collapses the character himself. However, the scope of "hard to understand" is very large, at least for me it is quite large). The failure is that there are too many supporting characters, and some characters in the original work always appear two or three times like passers-by. The author almost did not make a "slightly more careful" secondary creation of the original characters that appeared in his own fans. He only hastily designed the necessary background story and other basic frameworks. There is no flesh and blood at all. It does not look like a human being, but like a moving skeleton. There are too many characters in the story, and each character seems to have a hastily written setting. When the time comes, they are released to have a fight or do other things, and then end after completing their performance. Halfway through the movie, I only had some memories of the protagonist, and I didn't have a deep impression on the other characters, even the famous characters in the original work. The group portraits are poorly written, as if you think you don't need to shape the "original characters" when writing fan fiction. You only use their "paper data", which saves the author trouble. Readers who don't understand and are not interested in the "supporting characters" you selected will say goodbye to you. Similarly, there are too many supporting characters, causing the main line (or call it the purpose), although once mentioned by the protagonist, to be blurred among a group of supporting characters who appear in turn. I am gradually questioning - "What is the protagonist going to do?" "Is what he is going to do really related to the supporting characters you wrote?" "Isn't the protagonist really crazy to begin with, so he goes crazy and creates people wantonly?" Such a bad group portrait. Like most bad animals, chickens, ducks and geese from the market are fine to eat, but you don't want to know the detailed life story of the poultry being eaten.

It feels average and the main plot is weird. The protagonist doesn't want to be a fun person, but instead acts like a madman

Recently, readers have been reporting two issues. One is the issue of plot references, and the other is the issue of unclear main lines. The first question: In my initial setting, this book is a fandom, which means that the chapters allocated to each part are limited. In order to enhance the reader's immersion, I chose each part to follow a plot, from which the protagonist achieves his main purpose. The plot I used for the first spell world is: Parallel (one line of the original plot, one line of foreshadowing by the protagonist) → Crossover (the protagonist interferes with the original plot) → Parallel → Crossover → Explosion of original content (the foreshadowing explodes to achieve a single world goal and complete the chapters) Some readers reported dissatisfaction and quoted too many plots, so I made adjustments in the second world. The second top war plot: If the original plot direction is A→A1→A2→A3→B→B1→B2→B3→C→·······My direction is A→B→Original→Original→Original→······. I originally wanted to create an atmosphere with a war plot at the beginning, but the intervention of the protagonist would seem much grander, but some readers still felt that I should not introduce the plot. But this chapter is a foreshadowing. There are only short chapters of less than 10 chapters. If there is no plot at all, it will be difficult for these chapters to form a whole and they will be scattered. The third world is Naruto: Based on readers' feedback, I plan to follow the world view instead of the plot. But as I said before, the chapters of Zhutianwen are limited. In order to prevent readers from feeling confused, I need to reconstruct the story logic. In this way, it may take hundreds of chapters, and it will be delayed to achieve the effect of Zhutian. If the written effect is not good, please forgive me. Secondly, to answer questions about unclear main lines: Because it involves the subsequent plot, I can only give a rough answer. The purpose of the protagonist has been disclosed in the published chapters. The purpose of the magic world is to seize spells and magic power, and the war on top is to plant a seed. Even the ultimate purpose is explained, using space, time, and quality to create a new world (but whether this is the real purpose, whether there is a dual purpose of light and dark, don't ask me, I don't know.) Note: Brothers, I know that everyone is eager to read a good book, but as a new author of LV.1, I can only say that please give me some time to improve. I cannot act recklessly as a newbie, but I also ask for some tolerance. When I was still in school N years ago, Ruofeng Live said something: Some people just scold for the sake of scolding. There are many people around us, and there are always people who cannot be illuminated. They only have anger and negative energy in their eyes. I don't want to put too much energy on such people. And 90% of authors may only earn a few dozen a month, and I may be the same way. There is no need for everyone to criticize a novice author like a landlord. I look forward to spending the first new book period of a novice author with readers and providing the soil for the growth of the second book. Summary: Thank you all for your companionship. This book has already had one or two hundred loyal viewers. If any readers think there are any shortcomings in this book, feel free to comment and the author will make corresponding adjustments to live up to every true reader.

The main character in Ruined Three Views is basically a villain

Hello everyone, I am the author Jun. I have been writing this novel for almost two months now, and the data is very poor (to put it simply, it will increase when I write a large volume, but every time I change the world, the data will be cut in half). So far, the equivalent of full subscriptions is only more than 10 people, but my mood is not as bad as I imagined, because I feel that I have been touched by some friends. You may not understand how I feel. When you are a desperate author and find that some readers are friends who vote frequently after writing the first few chapters, you will find that there are always people supporting you. So I have been wanting to say something these days, but I don't know how to express my gratitude, and I don't have the ability to create a group to send gifts, so until today I finally couldn't help but leave a message to vent my inner emotions. Today I am making a slightly "empty" statement here. In order to support my friend, this novel will not be unfinished no matter what. Now I have conceived the content of the next three chapters, let us work together.