Mortal: Starting from Jiayuan City
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Li Hu, a modern man, was born into the mortal world with a golden finger that could plunder longevity. Starting from a mortal in Jiayuan City, he embarked on a path to heaven... Ps: 1. This is my second pen-writing work, and the author is still a little unclear about the plot arrangements, so watch with caution! Watch carefully! (Don't blame me for not reminding you, Jie Jie Jie) 2. The protagonist Li Hu does not grab the green bottle, nor does he go with Han Li. 3. The tentative maps are Yue Kingdom, Nine Kingdoms Alliance, Far West, Sea of Chaotic Stars, Dajin, and Overseas Fairy Islands. The maps are available while the maps are available!
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Official(9)Scraped 2mo ago
When I saw the Immortality Conference in Chapter 35, the protagonist participated in the competition and fought with others in the ring. The author wrote the novel about cultivating immortals as a martial arts novel. The protagonist raised a knife and attacked people in close combat. It was really weird. In the original work of Mortal, apart from relying on the blink of an eye sword technique to kill people at close quarters in the early stage, Old Demon Han rarely used melee swords or swords to attack people as his cultivation level gradually increased.
After cultivating immortality, do you still use a knife to fight in close combat every day? Do you write fan fiction or martial arts novels? Can't you read the original work? If you want to fight in close quarters, just write that the main character is practicing physical training. If you want to write that the main character is practicing Qi, then just sacrifice the magic weapon. How uncomfortable is it for you to look at me in such a nondescript manner? Go back and correct it. Some readers must have pointed out this problem to you, right?
It looked okay from the front, but was taken away by Jin Dan for fun later.
I've traveled through time and space, but I still won't take away an opportunity that I know I have, and I won't take away your fellow travelers who have traveled through time and space. In the Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals, except for a few physical cultivators, who raised a knife to attack at close range? Immortal cultivation novels will make you laugh when you see someone using a knife. It's awkward. I'll pick you up at close range and slash you with a knife. Just write about fantasy. Each person's body in fantasy is harder than a diamond. They are not carbon-based creatures and they are not part of the human species.
Your plot is too hard, just push it hard, download a copy when you meet someone, real talent
The writing is quite good so far. Don't reject the common sense with Han Li and you can trade some resources. In addition, you are also a time traveler, so you are an outlier in this world, and the law of heaven cannot control you.
Good fan fiction, please update it
It's written like a running account, it's not interesting. Please practice your writing more.
What's going on? The comments are missing?
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Official(9)Scraped 2mo ago
When I saw the Immortality Conference in Chapter 35, the protagonist participated in the competition and fought with others in the ring. The author wrote the novel about cultivating immortals as a martial arts novel. The protagonist raised a knife and attacked people in close combat. It was really weird. In the original work of Mortal, apart from relying on the blink of an eye sword technique to kill people at close quarters in the early stage, Old Demon Han rarely used melee swords or swords to attack people as his cultivation level gradually increased.
After cultivating immortality, do you still use a knife to fight in close combat every day? Do you write fan fiction or martial arts novels? Can't you read the original work? If you want to fight in close quarters, just write that the main character is practicing physical training. If you want to write that the main character is practicing Qi, then just sacrifice the magic weapon. How uncomfortable is it for you to look at me in such a nondescript manner? Go back and correct it. Some readers must have pointed out this problem to you, right?
It looked okay from the front, but was taken away by Jin Dan for fun later.
I've traveled through time and space, but I still won't take away an opportunity that I know I have, and I won't take away your fellow travelers who have traveled through time and space. In the Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals, except for a few physical cultivators, who raised a knife to attack at close range? Immortal cultivation novels will make you laugh when you see someone using a knife. It's awkward. I'll pick you up at close range and slash you with a knife. Just write about fantasy. Each person's body in fantasy is harder than a diamond. They are not carbon-based creatures and they are not part of the human species.
Your plot is too hard, just push it hard, download a copy when you meet someone, real talent
The writing is quite good so far. Don't reject the common sense with Han Li and you can trade some resources. In addition, you are also a time traveler, so you are an outlier in this world, and the law of heaven cannot control you.
Good fan fiction, please update it
It's written like a running account, it's not interesting. Please practice your writing more.
What's going on? The comments are missing?
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